rate_review Reviews

So hot! I normally don't go for this pairing, but the summary caught my eye so I had to take a look. And I was not disappointed, great job!

that was great better then i could hope for with a chichi/goku lemon...i know it\'s hard to write about them because of how they where on the show.but this was really nice...i hope for more soon..

I love Goku/ChiChi action. I clap my hands to you, for actually writing one.
Alot of people hate ChiChi, which I seriously DO NOT understand.
Goku is the one that ... eh nevermind, I think I\'ll open a can of unwanted wurms if I write anymore.

More love for Chichi and her husband :)
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Well, that was a nice one-shot!
I prefer the original pairings too. I'm writing a long story about the time between DB and DBZ, about Goku and Chichi. Already 18 chapters up, and still going on for a long time! Never thought I could do it, and yet, sto story keeps flowing...Go check it out, I'm sure you'll like it if you like G/CC lemon, romance and humor.

Your lemon scenes are very nice and descriptive, but some things are kinda disturbing to me, especially all the fluids you're talking about. Isn't there a bit too much to still be natural for a woman? I don't think female fluids 'gush' like that. But that's just a minor thing in the furthermore very nice one-shot.
And I do like the little 'morning afters', they're not boring at all!

Wow! That was so sweet! I love Goku/Chichi stuff!

Ano... I love this 'fic! Especially since you included that ChiChi was half demon, and could sense and had the physical capacity to purr.