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Aww, prett pretty^^ That was one of the sweetest (but not too fluffy and OOC) one-shots ever! I loved their interaction and it kind of buzzed when i read their lines - somehow i got good goose bumps^^ This fic has a kind of warmth that\'s now spread all over my body (and i\'m not talking about a lemony-induced-warmth^^;) It made me all fuzzy inside - i lolve when fics do that. That means that they\'re really good in my opinion. And you did a great job!! Thanx!

I absolutely love how you showed the vulnerable side of Vegeta in this fanfiction. It\'s a relief to know that Vegeta can actually show his sensitive side. I also thought it was somewhat funny when Goku was drinking.

HAHHAAAAA

Anyway, i just wanted to say that this fanfiction was great, and i hope you write more like this. Hopefully, the next one will be between trunks and gohan (Hint hint).

Very cool DBZ yaoi--it was nice and long--not pointless smut--a very good storyline too. I enjoyed reading this very much, and you kept Goku and Vegita in charecter very well, all in all an awesome read--keep up the great work! ^_^

OH MY GOD! This is one of the best fics i´ve ever read in my whole life!!! Keep on like this!! you are in the right path!

*sniffles* it was just so beautiful and sad. i wuvvled it very much and enjoyed every last sentence! *hugs vegeta plushie* will there be a second part?!?!?!

I'm not sure what I enjoyed more about this, the plot or the fashion it was written it. It took me quite a few paragraph's to adapt to your style of writting. You portrayed the entire story from the way a normal, human mind would flow; Cutting off at certain points or stating strange things for example. The language was very human, which makes it easy for a reader to understand and relate to. Normally for me, I don't bother with stories with suchs tones, because the writting tends to be choppy or not-understandable. That's why I'm so impressed with this peice. I really enjoyed reading it, and very pleased with how you came about writting it.
I hope you'll be adding more chapters to this, because along with the writting, the plot is very enticing as well. Please Continue
~AngelKitty

Well done! I havn't read a good one shot this good in quite a while.

Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Keep 'em comming!

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I don't know I h I have seen or read anything that you have posted before, but this was very good. Even without the lemons (and man do I like lemons) this was an excellent fic/chapter (?) You made the characters real, gave good background and the emotions where believeable. I hope to be seeing more soon regaurdless of whether or not this is/was a one chappie.