rate_review Reviews

I liked it. It was funny and I like how Goku describes himself. Good fic. I'd like to see it continued.

It was really IC and really wonderfully written. I enjoyed it very much, made me remember why I like this ship so.

Sappy is right! Geez, I finally find an adorable plotline w/ a Goku/Vegeta yaoi story and u SKIP ON THE LEMON!!! >< PLEEEASE tell me there's a 2nd chapter! Just one more, that all I ask! U have to finish it! ...Pleeeease? ^-^0

...okay, maybe not just one more chapter... That kinda would ruin the fluff having just one more chapter w/ NC17 content but... it resides on aff.net and it cries out for a lemon ending! How about a sequel? Maybe some more conflict on the Prince & 3rd class thing...? ... Okay, I think I'll give it a rest now... C_c

This is a very beautiful fanfic.

I like the fact Goku was honest about the sleeping bags instead of the alternate idea. What came out was more moving.

You know...for someone who claims they don't like Goku, you keep treating him well. Sort of the bumbling fool with flashes of brilliance. I like your Vegeta - watching, aware, positive he is in control, and always taken by surprise by Goku. (Not really surprise - he knows at some level what is going on.) Nice story, and a bit of fluff is nice. I actually think a lemon might have hurt this story. The point is courting, and sex would have been too soon.

You did it once again. You can't help but smile during this one. Yeah it was fluffy but in a really good way. I loved your Goku in this. He's so sweet and actually a bit calculatiing. I think he had Geta figured out the whole time. Courting...that was so cute. I think it was a good idea to not have a lemon. It would have taken away from the the cute and fluffy factor. Anyway, good fic, good vibes, good night.