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February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Its nice seeing Goku be much darker. While yeah sweet Goku is good to, that does get a tad old after awhile. Thank you for writing this. Please finish it. Again great job.
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far.
I would not mind vegeta/pan though. She is spunky, I like her.
And it would give Bura and Pan a commen front.
As well as the 2 now evil guys. XD
It would make some sense even vegeta/pan. But it is your fic.
I do think you should keep writing this regardless cause it is a good idea!
I would not mind vegeta/pan though. She is spunky, I like her.
And it would give Bura and Pan a commen front.
As well as the 2 now evil guys. XD
It would make some sense even vegeta/pan. But it is your fic.
I do think you should keep writing this regardless cause it is a good idea!
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August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice to see Goku ack that way no more fluffy Goku for now hope there will be struggle be twine Kakarot and Goku over Bra (after all Goku is technically and i right meaning a saiyan to)
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well the story looks interesting so far hope that you will manage to upload new chapters I would hate to see this story to get lost to the "sand of time". ^_-
I cant say I'm to much interested in possibility of Kakarot/Vegeta part but it is your story. ^^
I hope that you will manage to get some spare time and continue this story.
PS: I wish you good luck on your story:"Slave" Bulma/Vegeta hope you will update that one soon to. XD
I cant say I'm to much interested in possibility of Kakarot/Vegeta part but it is your story. ^^
I hope that you will manage to get some spare time and continue this story.
PS: I wish you good luck on your story:"Slave" Bulma/Vegeta hope you will update that one soon to. XD
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April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This.
There needs to be more of this, like, right now.
For srs. ._.
Also, I'm way late to the party. xD
There needs to be more of this, like, right now.
For srs. ._.
Also, I'm way late to the party. xD
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooo...good story. It's cool to see Goku's evil saiyajin side. Will he turn on Vegeta? Will he get what he wants from Bra? I can't wait for the next chapter!
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kool man update it has bewen ages
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Very orginial. I can\'t believe Vegeta accept Goku like that. Can\'t wait to read the next chapter. Hope you post it soon. And if you can send me an e-mail when you update this story ok. Thanks in advance. Until next time, take care and god bless.
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Curse my friends...Once more, I am reduced to a sniveling wretch, forced to review a story. Despite how good this is, and how much better it could be, provided more chapters...I still hate doing this. Please consider it an honor I review this fic, and I shall consider it an honor to read this story in its fledgling state. Update soon.