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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... this was a good first chapter.
Seems very interesting!!!
I hope you update, I would like to see where this goes.
Excellent.
from sexy-jess.
Seems very interesting!!!
I hope you update, I would like to see where this goes.
Excellent.
from sexy-jess.
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aargh! more! don\'t end it there! can\'t wait to read more! [http://www.visual-sentiments.net] [allieycosta@gmail.com]
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very original one..i was thinking all along what would happen if kakarott someday will awake..but nevr happened in the series...so you\'re doing a great work!!! i can\'t wait to read more!!!
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November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the "awakening" and all. God, who knew that Kakarot was so bloodthirsty? Please continue--I'd love to read more!
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooo... this is quite gory, but delicious in it's implications as well? What could Kakarotto want with Vegeta? And will Bra agree to go along with him? I can't wait to find out what you're cookin'!
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September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow i'm scared for her..great job with the chapter and i want more good story different..i want to read what he's gong to do with vegeta..update soon...maria