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Well, I'd say it was Heero and Duo, but the one with shorter hair feels more like Trowa to me, which could just be me being confused cause you did say they might be ooc. Hmmm... Some of the grammar and speech needs a little work. eg: Waked is not a word, but apart from that it was good.

No, it's good! It's really good! The whole air of mystery engulfs me. I just wanna know who the two rabbits are. ^^ Cuz I won't be able to sleep if I dun know. XD It's really good, and different. I've read fics like this one, and you pulled off the whole 'oh you'll never know who it is' thing really well. But PLEASE TELL!!! I saw the words 'long hair' in there....I thought it was Duo, but it could be Zechs I suppose...SPILL!!!

But, who is in it?? hee hee. Great fic. Maybe you should post another chapter where people find out who's in the fic. ^-^



-Aiya

I liked your story. I thought you did a good job, for you frist try. I say you should try writing anther one, only this time, try tacking a little bet more time with it, put in some detaels, that kind of thing. I just wish I could figer out who the roomate is, I fingered out who the first person was, but the other, I couldn't. I mean I have some guesses, but I am not shor though. Well anyways, great frist try, keep at it, like people always say, pratice makes purfecte.