rate_review Reviews

Read all chapters in one go only to realize this story will never be finished. I'm really annoyed at this as I thought it was beautifully done. It was built up in a way that was neither too fast nor boring, just the right mix, therefore very believable. I'm a sucker for conflicted emotions and this story had something special going on. Well, it's been 10 years soI'll just silently cry and accept the story has ended in a tragic way *goes into mourning mode*

Damn, I love this. I know you'll likely never see this given how much time has passed since the last update, but I wish you'd continue.

Someone please tell me that this is not the end~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is the first time i found a article about 17 and Gohan. Please keep writing. I can't accept that Gohan dead like this way. Did gohan really die?

Absolutely breathtaking... I\'ve never read a story quite like this and I\'m both moved and shocked by it. Truly, inspiring and captivating, the characters are portrayed as both invincible and vulnerable at the same time, the emotions rising at a balanced pace rather then them being in love from the first chapter.

And the sacrifice at the end moved me to tears, realizing that in the horror of it all, was the necessity for it to be done by his hands. Truly, it touched my heart and made me grieve for all involved. Also, I have a fanfic contest being held on my website and if you were ever curious and wanted to enter, please feel free to email me. Along with that, I\'d like your permission to link this story on my website... It\'s truly amazing, thank you.

Camaro

Why does 18 have to be such a bitch of a sister? I mean, come on! If it wasn\'t for her threat Gohan and 17 would be go at it like rabbits. *wishes*

I like the internal conflict going inside of 17. Well, don\'t really like, but you made it into very believable reading, which I can enjoy.

O.O NNNNNNNNnnnnnnooooooooooooo. Can\'t 17 just stand up to his sister? He has to go and strangle Gohan? AAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh.

You\'d better believe I\'ll be waiting for the next chapter! I was afraid I\'d read your author\'s notes and find out THAT was the end. (phew)


You\'re forgiven? Afterall, I am guilty of the same heiatus (sp?) Doesn\'t make it right, but I\'ll be having my own appologies to make in the future.

wow wow wow, that was amazin, but y did gohan have to die??? Are you gunna make a next chapter coz im totally addicted to this story lol. It gets to the stage where the first thing i do as soon as i get onto the computer is look to she if this story is updated. well anywayz bbbbbbbbbbbbbyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeee xxx ^_^

UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON hehe

wow i love you story, when are you going to update it? luv +{ShAdOw gUrL}+

luv ya fic, wen r u updatin???

i fink dat dis story is gr8. keep on writing more