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omg omg omg, this is probably the best story i have ever read on fanfic.net. i love juunana slash stories but hardly anyone writes them. well anyway i could go on foreva talkin about how gr8 it is but just to sum it all out. WRITE MOER CHAPTERS LOL :D

It just keeps getting better and better. I like this new side to 17. ^_^
Glad you had a good Thanksgiving! Looking forward to the next chap.

Thats a clever theory, one I\'ve never seen before; but when I think about it, Juuhachigou always seemed to be the older of the two. Its certainly a great new twist you\'ve added!
Looking forward to the next chap! ^_^

I\'m loving this! I was a little sceptical about the paring at first, but WOW, you sure did pull it off with flying colours! ^_~
That was an evil cliffhanger you left, but I\'m willing to wait for the next chap! ^_^

~Hecate18~

It was a lovely lemon. I think I like this couple. Now as for Trunks, what was the little shit doing not followoing his orders? And, yes, Gohan was enjoying it, but Gohan also used his body to save Trunks life. Of course, had Trunks not stayed to watch the lovely show, then he wouldn't have had the reason that got him to go Super sayian.

*tries it* Nope, guess I'm not that upset yet. hehe

Oh my god! How did I miss this story?! The shit is really about to hit the fan, huh? Trunks is pissed. This fic is great. Please update soon!

hey! anotclifcliffhanger! i cant wait to see what happens next!
Aw, poor lil Gohan. I like the kind android 17 ^_^
Once again i have to say that this is a great fic!
Your a great writer.
You better update soon!!

~soneji~

I believe Bulma only THINK she knows where Gohan got that hickey. Otherwise she wouldn't have made is seems as though it was no big deal. I wonder what she would do if she found out where/who he really got it from.

So, Trunks is going to be the kind of person who asks a million questions until either you are so twisted up in your own lies, you can't keep them straight, or you make the mistake of saying something you didn't mean to, huh? I guess that's the way it is about most young teenagers harassing their idols though.

Well, That was F number 1 from Mr. 17. It's a wonder that Gohan didn't/doesn't remember the threat of how many times did you say that word? How will he react when he does?

And Gohan's reactions when he did finally remember where/when he was were believable. I can imagine puking in a similar situation.

lemon lemon! lemon! lemon! lemon ! lemon!!!!!! O_O; -sings- Lemmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnn X3! or else -shakes fist - O_o lol..

I did like the original. I also like the rewrite. I'll have more comments after the second chapter.

On to chapter two.