rate_review Reviews

I absolutely loved your discription of the storm that was going on around them. I also liked the hunt/foreplay. Not that I'd bathe in blood before having sex, but with those two sayians, it just seems right.

Piccolo's acceptance was kind of funny. Him blu blurting it out was halarious. Krillin's response, or lack there of, well, I guess I'll just have to wait for an update(s?) tod oud out what he was really thinking.