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December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That\'s it, Bulma has to be crazy. She doesn\'t want to go home.... Bah! hehe, cancelling huh? Well well well. MMMmmmmmmmmmm
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is a great story!!! i\'m crazy to read more and know more about this one..calling BUlma \'slave\' is just defitnely a \'vegeta thing\' lol
keep the good work
vegetapr69
keep the good work
vegetapr69
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update update update!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, um... when will the story be updated? I\'ve been checking back everyday since I read the last chapter. LOL Can ya email me or something when it\'s posted? Thanks
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November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOh, Vegeta, that was mean! *smirks* Very clever though.
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November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit... I haven't been that turned on by a fic in forever. *bows* You made my night wonderful, thank you.
Hopefullu'llu'll update soon if there's anymore to this. =)
Hopefullu'llu'll update soon if there's anymore to this. =)
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great, first dbz fic I have started to read and I must say i'm impressed! Please update soon and keep up the good work.
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this fic sinds it's been published and after reading chapter 4 I just HAD to review. But it's not much of a review, it's more a celebration: I LOVE IT!!! It's certainly one of the best B/V fout out there! I love the powerplay and the dark side of Vegeta. Please carry on and know that there are more readers out there that love your story.
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooo! I really like chapter 4. So dark. So lustful. So full of lustful sex. Mabey the next chapter will be as dark? No matter, I love the whole story. Keep writing more.
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pls finish this . I love it , it 's one of the best B/V fics i have ever read