rate_review Reviews

Continue, fuck it.

-A

TYKA-NESS!!!*drooly*

you\'re a great writer!!!!keep writing more...this is adultfanfictions so it can be extra perv all you want...and this is the only place i feel safe to say that i love sex stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i\'m convinced that i am a girl since i like gay things...who knew?actually its sexier to me...i prefer m/m than f/m....i still like them but i love yaoi!!!!!!!!!!!! make the guys seductive!!!!!!i\'m so horny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow! There should be more beautiful PWPs, just like yours. ^_^x And... I do love Kai being tied to the bed... or to the sofa...

Write more stuff like this...? Pretty Please? ^_^x

~Horizont

Great story. Dont worry your not a perv!

well being swedish and all being able to write like this is already a big accomplish. still you give some mistakes like you're friends - not right, it's your as in the friends that are yours. if you write you're you say you are. I used to make that mistake so much, but someone started nagging me so mcuh I eventually stopped doing it ^^;...ahem... well kai as uke is always something worth reading, but this fic thoug the beginning was funny with all the attemps tyson made to get on kai's pants, it lacked a bit of content. basically, they just fucked each other. not that I mind that, but you could have worked the story a little bit more and added some more things to make it even more interesting.
humm, you did notice that you are no longer an active member of ff.net right? or you have a new pen name?

That was really good:D:D:D:D:D