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Quite the faery tale you have here... I really son't know what else to say. I am just a mite confused though. I get the fact that the story was probably placed in the medieval era and that most of the people in that era were very supersticious but what happened to Relena the Witch in order to kill her and banish the illusions?

I know that this is probably starting on a bad note but I have to mention from one fanfiction writer to the next that in your story although the grammer was excellent for that time period there was numerous spelling mistakes throughout the width of your tale.

If you don't like constructive criticism the I apologise profusely, you can totally ignore this review but, my vision on that is that criticism is what drives a person to be great.