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Oh my goodness, I\'m so nervous now for the competition! I really hope that Heero aces it, ten times over, he\'s been working so hard! Keep writing, I can\'t wait to see how it goes!!

From the little that I\'ve been capable of reading do to my girlfriends craviness THIS IS FREAKEN GREAT :\'( I want more NOW GO WRITE MORE go go on MOVE stop reading already

Just finished with chapter 7 and have to stop for the night, but thought I would give a little review. I love the story so far! I\'m a horse-enthusiast/owner, currently working in my horse\'s barn. I\'ve broken my collarbone because of my baby falling and we currently have a horse at the barn who\'s been stuck in her stall for 3-and-so months because of a torn tendon, so I can empathize a lot with the horseside of the story! Besides the horse stuff (which is a lot, I know) I like the rest of the story, too. I think you write very well and are good at explaining less well-known things. The only problem I have is that the writing is a bit messed up in places, words will be doubled or added in, obvious mistakes where I have to guess what\'s supposed to be there, though it\'s usually not hard to. Since you have betas, it might be from when you upload it onto AFF, and you might want to just look over the chapter after it\'s on here. Other than that, I can\'t wait until I have more internet time to read more!

w00t! That was a kick ass chapter! Can\'t wait to read about Heero\'s triumph at the Ag Show. Keep up the awesome writing. Until the next update. Ja!

Yaaaay! Thank you thank you thank you for posting so quickly! As always, a wonderfully written, nice juicy lemon for us. And very sweet cuddling afterwords. I just have to say, though: \"For Duo, everything was perfect.\" - that is usually the point in the story where everything goes to Hell, ne? I worry for the boy. Well, I look forward to more!

As usual, a well-written chapter. Your descriptions always make me feel like I\'m right there seeing things happen rather than just reading about them. However, that was an Evil place to cut things off! I anxiously look forward to the next chapter!

*growle playfuly* You are such a teas. Just when it was getting good, you end the chap. Oh I am so frustrated. I love this story I really do, I\'m just twitching a little bit. Please, please, please update soon.

A cliffe!?!? YOu are sooooooooo EVIL! And it was just getting to the best part. I can\'t wait to see where you take this. BTW is it considered a good idea to have hot passionate sex, the night before a horse riding competion, not that I am complaining, I was just thinking it might be hard to sit astride ahorse after sitting astride Duo, especially for a virgin. Can\'t wait to see how you make it work. And thank you for ending this tortuerous suspense soon, two more weeks of when are they going to do it, might have driven me crazy.
Just another perverted fan,
Nishi

Its a colt! Its a colt! *Dances around* YAY! The foal is here! ^^ Okay, calming down... Lol, Heero really *is* a mother hen, isn\'t he? *Snickers* Hilde gave him a good nickname... And it all happened so Hee-chan can still go to the competition! Heh, I\'m with Hilde, I\'m waiting to see who cracks first. My money\'s on Duo... *grins* But I could be wrong. *Bounces* Great chapter, can\'t wait for more!

AWWWWWWW!!!! Yay! Scythe is a mommy, and Duo and Heero are granddaddies! As usual, a very well-written chapter. Thank you for sharing this.