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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAHHHHH!!! That was EVIL! Heck, I don\'t even understand all of what\'s happening with this (as everything I know about show jumping is what you\'ve provided in this story thus far), and I still find myself very much lost in the story.
In all seriousness, I would like to say that your stories are consistently well-written and well-researched, and that I for one am greatful for the time and effort you obviously put forth. Thank you for sharing.
In all seriousness, I would like to say that your stories are consistently well-written and well-researched, and that I for one am greatful for the time and effort you obviously put forth. Thank you for sharing.
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
--Chapter Twenty Eight--
All right! I finally get to review. Sorry it took so long, I\'ve been reading this for a while, but for some reason I could never review...
Anyway, I love how this story progresses, you don\'t rush anything and build the relationship up between the two of them. Also, since I\'m an animal lover and an ex-pre-vet-student (hand complications ruined that job...) I also love the way you have tied the two hoses into the story. Your knowledge is so expansive on the subject and it\'s cool to see you interweaving the two.
Sorry again that it took me so long, but I\'ll be looking forward to more chapters.
--Dhampir
All right! I finally get to review. Sorry it took so long, I\'ve been reading this for a while, but for some reason I could never review...
Anyway, I love how this story progresses, you don\'t rush anything and build the relationship up between the two of them. Also, since I\'m an animal lover and an ex-pre-vet-student (hand complications ruined that job...) I also love the way you have tied the two hoses into the story. Your knowledge is so expansive on the subject and it\'s cool to see you interweaving the two.
Sorry again that it took me so long, but I\'ll be looking forward to more chapters.
--Dhampir
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...I feel like an idiot. That\'s supposed to say horses, not hoses, sorry about that.
Well, since I\'m doing another review, I might as well make it worthwhile and not just a correction-review.
I never really thought about having Duo as a vet, but it actually really does seem to fit him. You portray the characters through this story in such a different light and Heero being an accountant also really fits him.
Not that I\'m looking for them or anything, but there are also very few small grammatical errors--which I love.
Also, it seems a lot of people always make Duo out to be this sex fiend who\'s has all this experience and different partners and is always flaunting his body, but you turn him into the opposite. He\'s still the same, but you have him more conservative instead of \"Let\'s have sex!\"
As you can see, I\'m really a fan of slow progressing stories.
Thank you for taking the time to read this and sorry for the stupid mistake above,
--Dhampir
Well, since I\'m doing another review, I might as well make it worthwhile and not just a correction-review.
I never really thought about having Duo as a vet, but it actually really does seem to fit him. You portray the characters through this story in such a different light and Heero being an accountant also really fits him.
Not that I\'m looking for them or anything, but there are also very few small grammatical errors--which I love.
Also, it seems a lot of people always make Duo out to be this sex fiend who\'s has all this experience and different partners and is always flaunting his body, but you turn him into the opposite. He\'s still the same, but you have him more conservative instead of \"Let\'s have sex!\"
As you can see, I\'m really a fan of slow progressing stories.
Thank you for taking the time to read this and sorry for the stupid mistake above,
--Dhampir
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot men and horses..*drool* who needs anything else?
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ a wonderfull chapter !!!!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please!!!!!!!!!
^_^
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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It makes me happy when you update. Just sos you know, even with my severely limited knowledge of horses and riding, this story makes sense.
It makes me happy when you update. Just sos you know, even with my severely limited knowledge of horses and riding, this story makes sense.
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your fic, its one of the most well researched and in depth i have ever read, besides chimaera, which you also wrote, please update soon. :D
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NYAAAA!!! DAMN YOU!!!! *pout*
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love reading your fictions ShenLong ^.^<3 , the part about the chicken in Chapter 25 reminded me of this flash toon that one of my friends sent me, I\'ll post the link if you want to look into it. It really is very cute.
http://gprime.net/flash.php/eggsong
http://gprime.net/flash.php/eggsong