Well, some things I really loved about this chapter was the easy interaction between Duo and Heero. It seems like they're well on their way to being good friends, and now they can hope for something even more! The way they bond over Zero is also very sweet, and I enjoy the parts where they are cleaning or taking care of the horse the most. Zero is also a cool character as well...makes me want to brave my fear of heights and large animals and get on a horse myself^^
But perhaps what I liked the most here was how Duo responded to Heero. Once again, you kept it realistic, and instead of having Duo jump Heero the seond he knew that he was interested in him, you chose to make him wait and get to know Heero better. I can't tell you how refreshing that is...I've read so many fics where and and Heero meet, and after a 10 second exchange of mutual attraction, they're in bed together -_-;;; Doesn't work like that people!
I really wonder what's going to happen next...it sounds like things might get a little awkward with Heero continuing to live with Duo while they're still trying to get to know each other, AND while they have their mutual attraction hanging over their heads.
I really enjoyed reading this! So well put together and thoughtful^^ Please continue~
-BKFan
-BKFan