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by Deb

person ~*~Sparky~*~
schedule November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*dies* Ah the WAFF...of god so much WAFF...*ish currently drounding in the fluffy liquid* It was so freakin' adorable methinks I'm gonna die. Another great chapter, I can't wait until the nex one is up!
person BKFan
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay~ another exceptionally well done chapter^^ *sigh* I really wish I could meet a man as perfect and considerate as Heero #^^# What a sweetie!


Well, some things I really loved about this chapter was the easy interaction between Duo and Heero. It seems like they're well on their way to being good friends, and now they can hope for something even more! The way they bond over Zero is also very sweet, and I enjoy the parts where they are cleaning or taking care of the horse the most. Zero is also a cool character as well...makes me want to brave my fear of heights and large animals and get on a horse myself^^


But perhaps what I liked the most here was how Duo responded to Heero. Once again, you kept it realistic, and instead of having Duo jump Heero the seond he knew that he was interested in him, you chose to make him wait and get to know Heero better. I can't tell you how refreshing that is...I've read so many fics where and and Heero meet, and after a 10 second exchange of mutual attraction, they're in bed together -_-;;; Doesn't work like that people!


I really wonder what's going to happen next...it sounds like things might get a little awkward with Heero continuing to live with Duo while they're still trying to get to know each other, AND while they have their mutual attraction hanging over their heads.


I really enjoyed reading this! So well put together and thoughtful^^ Please continue~


-BKFan

person Princess2000204
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you plane updating REALLY REALLY soon!! You soo can't just leave us hanging here!!! Very very good and wanting more!!!
person Death Phoenix
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update really soon!!! This story is wonderful so far!!!!
person Lady Moon
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Chap as always. Up date soon, please. ^______^
person BKFan
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yessssss, you updated!!! WooHoo *dances* Ahem...now for all the things I loved about this chapter, which is just about everything^^V First, let me drool over the image of a shirtless, damp Heero......now, the image of a frightened Hee-chan receiving comfort from the capable arms of one Duo Maxwell...in a bed....*drools* Okay, I'm done^^ But seriously, cool chapter man, I like how their relationship is progressing slowly, like normal human relations are wont to do, yet now dreadfully slow, where one has to skip about five chapters before something of significance happens...what I'm trying to say is, you timed it just right^^ I also really like Zero! Coolest character ever^^ I look forward to your next update!
person halowing4
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. Looking forward to more. I'll have to check out that group Bond. I like classical music.
person BKFan
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woot~ Another update! I was so excited this morning when I saw that you had already added chapter 4! I really like this fic a lot...the idea is certainly original, and I'm learning so much just from reading your fic and your authors notes! I really like the characterization of Heero and Duo here, they are true to their original characters, but I could see them acting this way if they grew up in a "normal" situation. Heero was especially cute in the fourth chapter, I think his loneliness and his need to have someone to lean on really manifested itself through his fear of the hospital. Well, it sounds like Heero dropped enough hints already, I wonder when Duo is going to make his move! Especially now, since he has a compliant, high Heero in his home ^.~ Please continue, I love this fic!


-BKFan

person Rebecca
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is very well written. You are my favourite Gundam Wing author and I always read you work before any one else. I can't wait for the next chapters to come.
person Taka
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^! Whee! I love it, as always. You do such...incredible work! *smiles* I can't wait to read more!

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