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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I\'ve already reviewed you on ff.net but i just wanted to say that this is absolutely hilarious.
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
me like!!! oh so much!!! ^.^
lol i love it!!!
lol i love it!!!
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Much much better! I smiled as i saw the first paragraph gone. Good luck on further chapters!
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! This is a great fic! I am enjoying reading it immensely you have an amazing writing talent. Please update soon.
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
**Review of chapter 1**
Sorry for bei being so late. I read it on Friday and i reviewed it but for some strange reason the review would not show up, i thought i would explain why i hadn't said anything before this.
It is an interesting start. It has been done before so the originality of it has been lowered. The intro paragraph annoyed me because of the wording. I didn't like it, but i can let that slide.
I found myself laughing at least 2 times. The line was "you'll live" and of course i had to say 'or... will you... dun Dun DUN!!' *sighs and shakes head* anyway- if i saw this fic and it hadn't been for the challange i wouldn't have read it. It just doesn't interest me at all. Usually, if i'm going tad sad something, the summary has to be catchy or have something in it that will catch my eyes. I did decide that i would give it a try and it wasn't too bad. So far, there was no suspence or anything remotely like that. I can see that it's the first chapter- yet another thing i will let slide. I'm sorry if i am sounding mean in anyway but i'm 'grading' it kinda rough. A plus was you had little to no misspelled words! Woot! I like that. Makes it a lot easier to read.
I wish you luck on the next chapters, if you are going to still write more. I hope you do. Good Luck.
~Agent182
Sorry for bei being so late. I read it on Friday and i reviewed it but for some strange reason the review would not show up, i thought i would explain why i hadn't said anything before this.
It is an interesting start. It has been done before so the originality of it has been lowered. The intro paragraph annoyed me because of the wording. I didn't like it, but i can let that slide.
I found myself laughing at least 2 times. The line was "you'll live" and of course i had to say 'or... will you... dun Dun DUN!!' *sighs and shakes head* anyway- if i saw this fic and it hadn't been for the challange i wouldn't have read it. It just doesn't interest me at all. Usually, if i'm going tad sad something, the summary has to be catchy or have something in it that will catch my eyes. I did decide that i would give it a try and it wasn't too bad. So far, there was no suspence or anything remotely like that. I can see that it's the first chapter- yet another thing i will let slide. I'm sorry if i am sounding mean in anyway but i'm 'grading' it kinda rough. A plus was you had little to no misspelled words! Woot! I like that. Makes it a lot easier to read.
I wish you luck on the next chapters, if you are going to still write more. I hope you do. Good Luck.
~Agent182