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Abusive relationships are an evil that I simply can not understand or accept. It's terrible enough that they exist, it must be even more horrible to stay close to them.

But this 'abuse' not only happens physically, wich is worst... For every lie, misleading, are, in a way, an abuse of the person.

I really wish you continue this. Hope can not die yet, or ever; and Gohan must know this (if he ever does)

i loved it more more

I\'ve read this fic on another site and just like then, i love this fic. i really hope you update soon!!

I always consider it a testament to an author’s skill if he or she can pull someone into a genre they don’t usually frequent and you certainly did that here. I’m not a big fan of yaoi in general, but your story is amazing and you have me totally enthralled. If you have an update list, would mind adding me? I don’t want to miss anything from this wonderful fic. The first thing that struck me was how amazingly well thought out Akui is. He kind of reminds me of Frieza in the way he manages to appear benevolent while being maliciously cruel. I had shivers when he confronted Gohan in the hall – poor kid. The relationship you described between Vegeta and chibi Gohan was particularly poignant too. You did an excellent job of portraying Vegeta’s gentler side without going the least bit OOC and that’s not easy. Seriously great job! Please keep writing ^_~

Practically my absolute favorite story out of all DBZ fics I\'ve read! ^_^ I keep waiting for you to update! It\'s so good, so don\'t stop here! ^__^

More!
Soon!
I BEG YOU!!!!

I think all I can say is... WOW. Ok maybe that\'s not all I can say. ^__^ I normally don\'t read stories that are depressing, but I couldn\'t help myself. I\'ve been in one of those relationships so I can relate with it. You\'re doing a GREAT job of showing how it really is. Seriously, Akui freaks me out though, he reminds me waaaaay too much of my own ex *shivers* I am looking forward to reading this story as it continues. I really do hope that you plan on having a happy-ish type ending. Sad ens, ws, well, they depress me lol. In any case, wonderful story! I look forward to the next chapter!

~Neko