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Holy damn, this was fantastic. A realy pity it doesn't have a continuation. Hope you get back on it someday. X-) Thanks for sharing!

This is a great story. It's so in depth about Frieza and Vegeta's relationship. You made the characters exact. Very impressive. Great work!

Wow. That was a powerful insight into Frieza. I loved it. I've never seen the character written and described with more accuracy. And your clear, fluid writing style was amazing. Your use of language really brought it to life. I hope you will continue to write your stories.

Such a splendidly evil Frieza. You've created such a consistent version of the DBZ world - I can see how this Vegeta has become the one in your stories with Bulma. Provides a valid reason for Frieza to destroy Vegetasei - rebellions are a pain in the ass. I'm curious about what else Frieza fed the prince - and I liked the reference to pet bowl. Frieza does seem to treat him as a disobedient but favored pet in the need of a firm hand and training.

One wrong word, though. Recognizance should be reconnaissance.