rate_review Reviews

Not very good I\'m afraid... you probably should have put a warning that this was a mpreg so people such as myself, who faithfully believe that that overused idea should have been shot in the ass the second it was originally created, wouldn\'t have to be surprised by it. Also, this was pretty damn predictable, fucking cliche as well. But you write well enough so why not try something that actually takes some creativity rather then just borrowing all the bad parts from other people stories? I\'m sorry if this is harsh but honestly.. I see a lot of potential so please try and use it next time.

Camaro

Aww... that\'s the end. *is sad* Sorry it took me so long to get back to this fic. Busy, busy, and busy I\'ve been. Little Gogeta. How cute. *grins* I like this fic alot. I can\'t wait to see what you have planned next.

Awwww... *cuddles* Glad they got together at the end. Would have cried if they didn\'t... ^^;;; Anyway, wonderful story! I applaud you!

Wow. That was a really good chapter. I can\'t wait for the next. Hopefully by the end of the story there will be a lemon that doesn\'t start out non-con.

*grins* Hey! It\'s leelee, in case you didn\'t know (or forgot all about little ol\' since I haven\'t been on the B&R ml in so long...^_~). Awesome stuff! ^__^ I\'ve been meaning to read this for the longest, and I\'m so glad I finally did! It was great, very original. I like it a lot! I hope to see another chapter for this very, very soon!
Oh, and I think I heard something about you wrote a book? ^o^ Congratulations!

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! LEMON!! YAY!!!!!!! O.O -PRAISES- YAY!!!!!!!!! XD! O.OYou Updated! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! o.o! hope to see more soon o.o shall be on the look out. -stalks- o.o

Wow! I am really loving this story thus far. I wonder how the rest of the gang will take to this IF Trunks id pregnant again. And how will Pan react if he is? Please keep writing more! :)

No...NO! And here I thought that I was the queen of cliffhangers. You win. I submit. The suspense is going to kil. *d. *dies* There are you happy now. Please update soon. I don't think I can take it.

I love this fic so much i'm reviewing again on AFF!!! *chuckle* i liked the flashback/memories of when Trunks first had to 'put up with' Pan. Keep up the great writing!! Update!!

Yaaaaaaaay another chapter done X3! -is luvin it - =3! sucha good fic,nothing ive ever read before. MWHAHAHAHHAH =3!!! Cant wait to see what happens next -literally- XD! JA