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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is probably the wrong place to be doing it but thank you for the reviews you left me and I'm sorry that you cried. I have to admit that my favorite way to write is with an ending that kills (figuratively) and one that people don't expect. Well, with all the forshadowing you probably expected it but that's besides the point.
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You describe fight scenes very well. Something I envy, and don't see much of.
I don't know the song, so I can't say that effected my outlook on the chapter/story very much.
Take this part of this review from someone who knows and has to also, find someone who is willing to beta for you. Don't ask me though, there are multipul reasons why I need a beta reader.
Do you have plans on continuing with this or was this a one shot?
I don't know the song, so I can't say that effected my outlook on the chapter/story very much.
Take this part of this review from someone who knows and has to also, find someone who is willing to beta for you. Don't ask me though, there are multipul reasons why I need a beta reader.
Do you have plans on continuing with this or was this a one shot?