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O_O. OMG. That was amazingly written. I really could not stop reading this from beginning to end. It was just...yeah. I applaud you on this.

Awsome, totally awsome, except for a few I don\'t know, spelling errors I think. But it was very good. I liked it very much. Good oneshot. Trunks and Goten are sooo cute together. I hope to write my own Truten story one day ::looks about thoughtfully with a goofy smile upon her face:: someday... lol. Till then, I\'ll keep reading other peoples.

thanks
Later
Inus_Kagome_Forever

yay,*clap*yay*clap* More, need more. `:]

Whooooo. Okay. I know my room, being at the end of the house, tends to be hot on its own, but..... Oie. *needs to go outside to cool off* Very well done.

*is drooling* Not good? Not half bad? I don't think so. That was REALLY, REALLY, REALLY good! Okay, so I like lemons in general, as quite a few folks know, but this was, once again, really good. Your discriptions were excellent. Your, uh... PLOT, yes plot was a nice, believeable way to get them together also.

Okay, technical stuff. I don't know about your spelling, because I read phonically, but your grammar and puctuation were excellent also.

Hm-m *clearing throat* (Muwahahahah, I know) I bet you can't top that. No, I know you can't top that. I DARE you to try and top that. .....

.....*wonders if evil challange will work*

wow.... *wipes the drool away with the back of her hand*

Very nice, very very nice! Got some real good feelings from this one! *__^
Now if only i could get you to write one about goku and vegeta. LOL

Owww...*grins* Loverly!