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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What I really like is that Vegeta is dominating Cell here. Considering their prior history, I had expected Cell to be the agressor. Nicely done twist - and very clever of Vegeta to damage his tail enough to keep Cell weak. "Hello, uke," just made me giggle. *g*
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Hello, uke!"... tehehehe.... Another great chapter. I wouldn´t have expected this twist though, but it makes the story even more interesting. Anyway, maybe you should change it to V/PC then as to not give the wrong impression?! (That wasn´t criticism, that was just me being pedantic...^-^) And don´t worry, if you´ll take longer with the next update then that´s what you do and we will wait! ^-^
~sinningia~
~sinningia~
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
kewl chapter. I like it! Very much so! In the first chapter you had the story center more around Cell´s point of view- that was interesting to say the least. There are so many stories already focused on Vegeta´s thoughts-process, so maybe you could uphold this Cell-centered POV? Anyway, you have a fantastic way with words and keep the two in character (as much as it is possible her!) That´s rather rare and makes the story even more loveable. Keep up the great work!
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well written, and very much in character. Fights are notoriously difficult to write, but you did an excellent job. I never thought of Cell having hair before - interesting touch. Vegeta's ego would push him to accept Cell's challenge.
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting take on Cell's genetic inheritance. Cell and Vegeta plg? Ig? I actually like it. I never thought of these two together before, but this story makes it work. Vegeta gets flustered at Cell being naked. I like, I like. It seems like Cell is deliberately goading Vegeta into a more intimate battle. Can't wait to see what happens when Vegeta grabs his tail.
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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No suck luck~~*dies of laughter* I realize its a typo--but it's a great typo. *wipes tears out of eyes*
Anyway. I loooooooove this!! (And this is me, die-hard V/Gk fan.) I love Cell. *twitch* Did I really just say that? Yes, I guess I did. I love *your* Cell. I love your sense of humor.
And the comments about Goku and his need to be naked in front of everyone. Vegeta's thoughts. Oh--and when he shook Cell, that was funny.
But CRUEL that you just LEFT it like that! How mean! *sob* *stops sobbing and goes off to write ficcie*
Card!~
Anyway. I loooooooove this!! (And this is me, die-hard V/Gk fan.) I love Cell. *twitch* Did I really just say that? Yes, I guess I did. I love *your* Cell. I love your sense of humor.
And the comments about Goku and his need to be naked in front of everyone. Vegeta's thoughts. Oh--and when he shook Cell, that was funny.
But CRUEL that you just LEFT it like that! How mean! *sob* *stops sobbing and goes off to write ficcie*
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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. I like the way Cell can take off his 'armor'. I would have never thought of that. The sayian tail is a nice touch. So, what is Vegeta thinking at the moment?
I can't wait for chapter three.
I can't wait for chapter three.
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, here too! Awesome! Update somewhere soon!
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. I like it. *twitch*
That beginning part in the italics reminds me of the budokai game. (wasn't there some chapter you could unlock where Cell has a dream or something? I remembeere ere being something like that.)
Anywho. Looks good to me.
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That beginning part in the italics reminds me of the budokai game. (wasn't there some chapter you could unlock where Cell has a dream or something? I remembeere ere being something like that.)
Anywho. Looks good to me.
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, when I read it the first time, I didn't realize it was so long. That's a good thing though. :)
I am also happy that this story has a build up (aka plot). The idea of hot, sweaty monkey/android sex takes a little getting use to and a PWP with this couple would have been, well, weird. Ah, but I certainly can/will get use to it. :) (yes, that's a second grin)
I can't wait to see how the, uh, training goes. hehe
I am also happy that this story has a build up (aka plot). The idea of hot, sweaty monkey/android sex takes a little getting use to and a PWP with this couple would have been, well, weird. Ah, but I certainly can/will get use to it. :) (yes, that's a second grin)
I can't wait to see how the, uh, training goes. hehe