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Hasn\'t been updated in a while it seems. What happens? Try picking this up again. It\'s a pretty good story, and I looooove the whole BV 3yrs thing. Update?

When writing something like future tenses they can either end in s as in We\'ll know what happens next chpt. or ed as in What will have happened in the next chpt?Just thought you might like to know that.Please update soon. Arigatou!
JA NE!

Great fic!!

I can honestly say that this is the first time in a long time I’ve found a canon B/V get-together that had me disappointed when I got to the end of the chapter because there was no more to read. I really enjoyed what you’ve done so far and I’m most definitely going to be looking out for future updates. I particularly liked the way you introduced Bulma by the way. I always thought that facing immanent planetary destruction, not once, but twice in less than five years, plus finding out that your best friend’s an alien and being stuck alone on Namek for weeks on end with a pissed off Ice-jin on a killing spree would add a level of maturity to even the most frivolous personality, but unfortunately a lot of get-togethers tend to portray Bulma as tough she’s still the flirty carefree teen she was in Dragonball, more obsessed with Vegeta’s ass than the safety of the planet and frankly I find that really annoying. I’m so glad to finally find a writer with a bit of insight into the human psyche (does happy dance) Please keep writing! I can’t wait to see your take on everybody’s favourite prince ^_~

Great 1st chpt.Please update soon. Arigatou!
JA NE!

I really liked your story you should write some more...