rate_review Reviews

A sweet little story. I enjoy how it brings together the extended families of DBZ universe into a quirky household, and Trunks and Goten's expanding relationship feels natural to their characters. Also, hot saiyans. <3

Oh yeah, you write about the cutest DBZ couple too! \o/ My favorite sentence in all of this was,

"Trunks slid back up even with him, looking just as calm and collected as he usually did, giving no sign (other than his nudity and a small drop of cum on his chin) that he had just brought his best friend to a sensual summit."

That was too cool xD and them walking home naked oh man, somebody draw me that picture!

I really, really, REALLY liked this! You have quite the gift for descriptive writing ;)

You also have quite the gift for seamlessly giving descriptions of a character's personality. I am not very familiar with the DragonBall Z "verse", yet I could glean a great deal about both Goten's and Trunks' personalitites, as well as their relantionship background, during the course of your story.

And the sex? Brilliant!

I loved this line, as Goten was climaxing from Trunks' oral ministrations, "which the other swallowed as if it were the only water in a hundred miles and he was dying of thirst."

I also loved the part where Goten was pulling out handfuls of grass as he was being penetrated by Trunks. It is little details like these that make a story "come alive" for me.

I do hope you decide to write a sequel, at some point. I'm very curious at what the reaction would be, should these two best friends actually "come out" to everyone else. *grin*

Hye, Andy, this is you\'re Fair Lady here...this was done very well..very hotl.....

Cute, Hot and fluffy all at the same time! I don't normally read this pairing, but you did a good job with it, so three thumbs up for you!