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Awwwwww that was so sweet! I really liked it

uhhh... no

OK I read it and I got a compant.... first off before I compane I must say the rest of your story was good. I only had one problem with it. And that is No one can talk an whole phargher in there sleep. So the whole thing she say in her sleep could never really happen. See even for ppl that do talk in there sleep they can only mutter some words or a brocken up senteacs. But never could they go on and on and on. Like you had her do. If you chage it then your story with be super cool.Couse it will seem much more real and even in fantcey some baices in reality is needed.

sorry to be picky, but I can't help myself sometimes.

aww... that was so cute ^_^. good job and keep it up :D.

I like the way you built up the intro. First we were given a vegetabulma love scene and then sitting in the bloody kitchen! The setting out of your paragraphs and so on turned me off your story. It shouldn't have to be so much work to defrenciate words but that's what i had to do with your story. keep writing, and remember *the layout*. Don't think me an evil cow k? Well done the story was nice/

Dude that was so cool. I loved that story. I had so many sweet images from it.

funny story

I really liked i. And if I say something like this than it really is true. this is the first time I review for a Bulma Vegeta fic. Keep up the good work.

I love this fic. I read over & over again because it\'s so cute. Keep writing...lafemmevegeta

OMFG!!!! this story is so completely kawii! i really think thats exactly how it should happen for those two! -happy sigh- :))))) you have great talent!