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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I've got to tell the truth, I always do... It's quite rediculous ar asr as truly being related to the characters it is... And it's short. Not much of a story, just sex...
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i wish you would continue this short story.it\'s so sweat and full of love.vegeta is ooc but that\'s ok...just think about it.....
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the plot line to the story, however you were a bit sketchy on punctuation as well as description. the story would be a whole lot better if you touched that up a bit. but otherwise it was a great story. Keep up the good work.
Ciao
Queen
Ciao
Queen
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June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
God this was really sweet and very good...nice job.
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May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cute. Very cute. A totally blameless and nice lemon. This kinda thing reminds me that the work of a true fan can be very sweet. Nice job.
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May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta seems a bit occ though, not rude enough or something. Apart from that, it\'s cute and nicely written. ^^
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October 29, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet but Vegeta is a little OOC.
Good luck for the next stories !!
Good luck for the next stories !!
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October 26, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet and cute. I enjoyed it. bura-chan