rate_review Reviews

*laughs insanely* Heero is so damn sneaky..and sexy.

that was soo funny at the end otherwisr rilly good story

Thank you! I love that ending. No ridiculous or over-done mush, no girlishly fanciful thoughts of what they had done, and no graphic yet unneeded details about Heero\'s genitals, \'the moment\', or any weird smells. Yes, that was a horrible rant - unfortunately, some very good lemons have those instances in them and they slightly sour the overall fic. This, on the other hand, was as funny as it was hot, as intentionally comical as it was realistic. And I still can\'t get over the ending - go figure, Relena would consider Heero to have \'won\'. I\'m afraid of what she might do next to him to win the next encounter. Also, I enjoyed this view of Heero and Relena\'s first romance - it sounds aoughough 3 years of hiding their feelings couldn\'t overcome those seven minutes. It was nothing dramatic - more direct, very good.

Hello,

Great job on this fic, I\'d love if you were to continue it but understand if you don\'t, that\'s okay. Anyway I really like how you did things so that it wasn\'t all sex and I congrats you on a job well done.