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for Eternal Flame

by Deb

person ArwenES
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know. i hate to say it. but i read this tory after reading things like chimaera and time fault and out. so ou can see why i feel like this story is crap. these last two chapters had me grimacing at the sheer stupidity of it all even after i mostly skimmed. but since this is one of ur earlier stories i suppose i can understand the lack of class. u had to start somewhere right?
person shivalatina
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. You should post this on MM.org. I'm glad I went to this sight to post my story to then find you rewrote a continuation to your 'Lost Souls' Arc. I knew you were evil, especially since you had Duo dress Wufei in a Tutu. Poor guy. This was a wonderful story and I'm glad I found it and read it. You continue to amaze me with your creative ideas for plots and stories. I hope that my imagination can one day take shape like yours does. I wish you the best of luck as I know you are currently working on your sequal to 'Equinity'. Congrats again on a story well written but I must admit this story was riddled with spelling errors. I don't know if it was you or if by transfering your story to this site it got weird. I think I'll check mine to be sure, but it's still readable. Bye ^_^
person Shinigami02
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*faints from delight*

Yusuke: ...Is it...yanno, safe to touch her?
Hiei: *frowns* Don\'t attempt it. You might lose a finger.
Kurama: Hiei, it WAS your fault in the first place..
Hiei: I was trying to wake her up, NOT get bitten!
Kuwabara: *snorts* Way to go shorty.
Hiei: *glare*
person cve
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this trilogy with all it\'s delicious 1x2x1 and 3x4x3 yaoi moments. You truly are a gifted writer and a dedicated one, to write so many *amazing* stories over the years on all these scrumptious Gundam boys.

<3 <3 <3

person bakahanyou
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KAWAII!!!!!!

I have to say that this is by far the best heero/duo series I have ever read. This series has many things other fics don\'t, namely a thing called plot. Well done. You really should be getting paid for this.
person bakahanyou
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please make another sequel. *still laughing over wuffers and the buck\'s party incident* justice was served, ne roflmao
person priscel
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yo! thanks for posting Ch. 33, wow I love this story. And I hope lief\'s pop makes it through it. and what way to end thet cht chappy, can\'t wait to read more.
person priscel
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey hey update soon \'kay?
person Solo\'s Ghost
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU UPDATED THIS STIRY YEAY! I love this one and Chimaera. This series is absolutely fabulous. I can\'t wait till you upadate this and Chimaera agian. :)
person shikaru
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay! i just got done readin chpter 27 so now i command you to finit! it!
duo: by the power of shinigami i command you toish ish it....uh was i suppost to say that, right?
shikaru: ^^;

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