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by Deb

person Solo\'s Ghost
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This whole series has been so fantastic. I am glad that Leith and Paul are doing well they are such a cute couple (as are Shane and Fayah in my opinion). The wedding was wonderful and the terrible twosome were perfect poor Benny i hope his hangover was not too bad (hehehehe). The plot line has been fantasic as well what is gonna happen when Grant finds out there are no more Gusndams? Please keep updating this and Chimera (what can I say I love your work) Please. There is so much more out find out I can\'t wait. Oh yeah and one more thing is Heero gonna fiigure out Duo wants to get married? Oh well keep up the amazing work :)
person Kort
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, \'nother chappy! ~Does happy dance.~ I liked it. ~Bows before Shenlong.~ Oh, Great One, never leave us to drift without your amazing words of wisdoms (fics). Sorry I get very carried away, but I love this series. It is really good. I cannot wait for your next chapter.
person shikaru
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i am just beginning to read this........i love your chimaera......sa msa makin my own story about duo......hohohohoh.....duo:\"what are you scheming in that head of yours?.......\" shikaru:\"nuttin my pet.....\"*smiles evilly*......duo: \" um we need those guys with the sedation in here.....*scary girlfriend*\"....shikaru:\"come to me , duo-sama\"{apologies to all perverts of duo!}
person Kort
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello, first off I would like to say that I love your stories. This one is great. I love the bachelor party, or bucks party is what I think you called it. I love Leith. He is great. Write faster or I will fly to Australia and chase you with a spork if you do not continue writing! Pwease! *Big puppy dog eyes.* I am just kidding, please do not hurt me or deprive me of any more of your stories like my evil internet does. I have a friend that like me has read all your stories (well she hasn\'t gotten to this one and Chimaera yet, but I guess I can forgive her). I can\'t wait for the next chapter. I NEED MORE ETERNAL FLAME!!!! I am a Gundamk. k. *hides in corner and cries*.
person Ryumu
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must confess I don\'t like yaoi very much ordinary... But I do love your writing : with you Heero and Duo are so well together...Love your stories...go on
person Rez
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
EEp! Everything is coming together now, isn\'t it? Hehe. Good for Leith, being able to remember what he was doing, if not all. This is really going to help them isn\'t it? I hope so. I don\'t like Mr. Martins being held captive by that asshole. Grrr...makes me so mad.

Cute wake up on Quatre\'s part. Poor Trowa, how was he supposed to believe his wildest dreams were real. *snickers* Lucky bastard. With the sound advirom rom both of them, Toby and Benny are going to be good kids when they\'re older.

Poor Paul. All of this on his young mind. I do hope that Leith will be okay, and able to walk. If not I just might cry for real *sniffles* Hehe, right. Keep typin\'
person Rez
schedule September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, what a heart wrenching chapter. Poor Leith, poor Paul, poor Mr. Martins. And my deepest sympathies and condolences for you and those close to you who shared the pain of losing a loved one. Indeed a potential tear jerker had I been in a more crying mood.

All that is positive I prefer to not elaborate on. Although I will say the beginning with Sally and Wufei had melingling. It\'s good to know you\'ve given Leith others who care. His neighbors are on mytop twenty fave OC\'s list. That\'s an accomplishment. Seeng as how only Fayah,Shane and Toby are the only /gir/girl from this series on that list. Well, yeah.

That\'s enough for one night. Keep typin\'
person Rez
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I honestly can\'t believe you had Quatre say that. I laughed outrighich ich made my roomate look at me oddly. That was too funny. *ahem* yes...

Agst filled chapter to say the least. Leith has gone to the police...Bob has sent a message to Leith (I assume)...and Trowa and Quatre\'s suspicions are being aroused (snickers) at the mysterious death of Shand. Oh the mystery and anxiousness.

Poor Paul and Leith. So many raodblocks. But they will perservere. They must if they are to be the second cutest couple of them all. Wait, make that third. Ummm, yes, third. Hehe. Don\'t mind me, too many Lindt. Keep Typin\'
person Rez
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That\'s some solid advice from good ol\' Fayah. Such a doll, she is. Poor Leith. He\'s all concerned over what might be happening with his dad. Such a good son. I still say that he should be astute enough to realize something was wrong first off. Oh well.

Well, isn\'t Shane getting a little possessive. I understand his circumstace and all, but still. Fayah is more than just a prize or piece of land that can be claimed. Such a runt that boy is. Gotta love him though.

And poor Howie. We obviously know where all the scrap has gone and now we know how those mobile dolls were built. Still, poor guy. I Hil Hilde still. At least Heero has enough class to not make Duo phone that evil wench. Poor guy has gone through enough with her. Evil wench.

Good stuff so far! Hurry up with those updates! It\'s torture having to wait. Jokes. Keep typin\'
person Rez
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been dying for three days trying to read this, but every time I keep getting interrupted. *sigh*

In any case, wow, Bob Martins worked on the Zero system? that can\'t be right, can it? I guess after OZ took control over Zero and downloaded it to try and test their own soldiers. Meh. Confusing stuff, that\'s what it all is. But I\'m assuming that what you were going with. Otherwise it would seem that Matins had a brush with the notorious ive doctors. *shivers* those guys creep me out.

Go Duo! He\'s such a little wierdo. I love the messages though. I\'m seriously considering putting one on my machine. It\'d be great, seeing as how to everyone of my friends I\'m the devil and my counterpart, a.k.a. my best friend is God. What? Gotta make your own fun. Otherwise, how else will you get it?

Awww, poor Leith. He\'s all concerned about his dad. Well, good for it. Some kids would cheer at that. But at least they have a good relationship. That\'s always nice.

And concerned he should be. What\'s up with that stupid professor guy. Oi, he freaks me out. And he\'s really terrible. A fiend! How could he be so evil as to attack L3? All of those innocent people. Plus he\'s trying to have the UEA have them turn over the G-boys? Who does he think he is? Grr. If he wasn\'t a ficticious character, I\'d destroy him. Sheesh, some people are just evil. And willwill Leith, Paul and the rest of the L2 boys factor into this? Will they be able to help? I hope so. It could be a family affair. Or training, if you will. For the heroes of tomorrow. Yay!

Good stuff, as usual. Just have to update more often. Jokes. You take as long as you need to keep coming out with quality chapters. Just, don\'t take too long. Wouldn\'t want me growing out of the fanfic reading stage before you\'re done. Yeah. Keep typin\'

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