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WOW! That lemon between Wufei and Sally was wonderful. Everything a girl dreams of for their wedding night. One curiosity though. Was Sally supposed to be a virgin in your story? I wasn\'t too sure. I know that she hasn\'t been married before, and that this was her first time with Wufei, but was it her first time at all? I\'m just asking because we all know that the first few times hurts. And with the way you described it there was no pain for her. I\'m just squabbling over symantics aren\'t I? Oh well.

What\'s going to happen to poor Bob Martins? Oh dear. It\'s obvious that this Ronald guy (I don\'t know if that\'s right) wants him to re-program the chips to be the AI for the mobile dolls. Is Martins up to it? Oh dear, the anticipation.

And poor Leith. He doesn\'t know what\'s going on. Will he be able to help save his father. I hope so. I love the whole Paul/Leith thing. It\'s so sweet. Especially since I think you\'re going to have Leith phone Paul to say he\'s worried about his dad. That\'s going to be so cute. Paul\'s gonna help little Leith out. Hehe. Can\'t wait.

As always, I\'m loving the stories and am eager to read the next chapter. Till then, keep typin\'

Awww, poor Duo wants to get married. Hehe, can\'t wait to see what you\'ll do in the end. Nice chapter, I must say. Great reception, and the last bit with Duo and Wufei had me struggling to keep my laughter in check. Plus, when Paul and Leith were at the limo having the introductions, I was trying not to say \"awwww\" out loud.

What\'s up with Mr. Martin though? Who\'s the mysterious antagonist? And exactly why does he need Bob Martins to complete his plan for revenge? And curse whoever it is that h\'s threatning Leith. Grrr. Oh well, not like Leith won\'t be protected by the G-boys and Paul; plus the whole ang.ang. Hehe.

Great chapter. I will admit that I was a touch concerned about the late update. But the chapter was worth the wait. Till next time then. Keep typin\'

Oh no! What\'s going to happen to Leith\'s dad? And what was that abour Leith driving the limo for Wufei and Sally\'s wedding? My, won\'t that be interesting? But thei second date! Awwww....it\'ll be so cute. That is if i even happens with Leith\'s dad being kidnapped. But what if he doesn\'t notice until it\'s too late? Like the morning of the wedding Dun dun dunnnnn. Well, great stuff. I LOVED the whole Heero printing the photos and assin them around the preventers network. LMAO. I honestyl couldn\' read for a miute or two. Just the implicatation. And the tough time everyone giveor Wor Wufei. Plus Quatre\'s little hangover. LOL. Can\'t wait. Keep typin\'

Oh Gods! I just about buster a gut from laughing so hard! That was rich! Who-boy was it ever. Poor Wufei! LOL!!!!! Poor, poor Wufei
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The date with Leias cas cute! Goddess bless Monty Python and the Holy Grail. I have that movie and now have the strangest compulsion to watch it. The black knight scene has to be one of my favorites too! And that little make-out session between Paul and Leith...Kawaii!!

*still laughing over poor Wufei* Oh Goddess, where DID you come up with that?!? Oh dear. That was gold! Pure gold!

*giggles insanely* Oh dear. I could not stop the entire time reading this. *laughs outright* You are pure evil. Correction, you made Duo pure evil. Good ol\' use of literal words. \"not a hair on his head\" LOL. Poor, poor Wufei. However, wouldn\'t you think he\'d, being a Gundam pilot and all, be able to detect alcohol in a drink? Even if it is Orange juice that hides the scent and appearance. Oh well. Wonderful chapter. My main question is how in the hell did Duo ever convince Trowa of all people to be his accomplice? I guess it is the best choice seeing as Heero would have spoiled his fun, Zechs would have been too... modest, and Quatre just can\'t keep his mouth shut. *realizes the double implication* oops. LOL. Great update. But what about Paul and Leith?Well, we\'ll just have to wait and see. Keep typin\'

Hehe, bad Duo! I have to feel bad for Wufei, even if it is funny.

*jitters* Damn, Duo and that outfit!! It has to be a favorite of yours since it\'s in almost all of your stories. But it would just be such a nice outfit on him. I totally agree. Oh dear, the stag party is next, is it? Hehe. Can\'t wait to see what Duo has planned for Wu-man. Won\'t this be interesting. And Paul is going out on his first date. Kawaii! Too sweet!

And oh, how the plot thickens. What\'s up with the evil dude who\'s out to steal the chips? And what does it have to do with Leith\'s father? Oh dear. How will this all turn out? Well, we\'ll just have to see. Till then I suppose! Keep typin\'

Uh-oh. Complicted plot already? That can\'tgoodgood. Especially since it\'s gonna include our little Paulie and his potential love interest. *sigh* That can\'t be fun. But other than that, the story\'s going great so far. The only question on my mind is whether or not Wufei and Sally\'s marriage is gonna be on time or not. Because of this whole evil bad men stealing Winner Corp.\'s chips and all. Cute verifications too. His fleece was black as soot. Creative. Now, to return to the wonderful land of reality. Ha! Wonderful my behind.

YYeeessssss,...thank god ya pair-up paul with a guy,...*grins*..
NOT with a girl like shane,...i\'m actualy abit dissapointed that ya pair-up
shane with a girl instead with a guy,...*pout*...NO,..i\'m NOT anti-het or somethin,..
it\'s just that there\'re some het pairings that doesn\'t seem quite well match to me,...
like 1+R or 2+H,...*shudders*...wufei+sally is ok,...they\'re quite a perfect match in
my personal oppinion,...*wink*...but shanexfayah doesn\'t seems quite the right
match to me,...[just in my personal oppinion kay,..hope no hard feelings,..*grins*]..
with shane lookin quite cute and all,..it\'s seems such a big waste on a girl,...*shrugs*...
BUT seeing ya pair-up paul with quite a cute and sexy guy,....i can overlook shanexfayah
pair,....and i hope ya gona pair-up colin+mikey and benny+toby,...they seems quite
perfect for each other,...*puppy-dog-eyes*,...not now of course,...wait untill they\'re much more
older,...but if ya can,...i hope ya might consider them,...*wink,wink*,...
all in all,...hope ya gona continue soon,...and keep-up the good work kay,..
till yer-next chapter,...Jaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGaaaanbbbaaattteeeeeeee-Neeeeeee!!^.~!!

Thankies for the notice! And for the makings of a good fic too! So far it\'s starting out fun! Poor little Paul feeling left out? Well, this Leith character is starting to sound as though he may fix that. You are just such a greuthouthor. Most people would bore me with the logistics of making a cup of cofee. However, you still manage to make me read the whole paragraph and not delete the window. Strange, no? In any case, this is going to be the starting of another great fic it seems, and you\'re gonna kill me on those days between updates. Oh well, it\'s the good kind of anticipation I suppose. Not to mention the whole Duo in a french maid outfit. Just imagining that made me laugh. Can\'t wait to see what else is in store. Till then...