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for Perfect Prey.

by Natea

person SailorAuroraHelios
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omfgomfgomfgomfgomfg... *rocks back and forth in chair tears in her eyes* O..m..f..g.. *cries* You... should have seen me when I realized I knew exactly what Ivana meant by going \"hunting\" with Duo and Heero.. (Even though I DID know all along, it was sort of like realization, and I guess cause it screwed over their plans) \"It’s bound to be a challenge for once.” I was like... \"O________O NO!NONONONONONO! OMFG NO!\" *chews on lip* oh god...*buries face in hands* Oh god!! I was literally scooting forward and was on the edge of my seat... My little brother knocked something over and I heard the crash and nearly jumped out of my seat. Shit, that\'s how it\'s been everytime I read this... I feel like I\'m there... I got your e-mail a few days ago, I had read it before school and then totally forgot until last night... I was like \"Wait... PERFECT PREY IS UPDATED!\" And I quickly went to read it and.... aff.net was done x____X I was so mad... but anyways... Yeah. ^___^ I looooooooove this ficcy..... I like it more like this, longer and expanded and stuff... *grinning* And the shounen ai is a MAJOR plus! ^__________^ hehehehe... E-mail me when you update again, thanks!!!

Update SOONLY!!!! Pleeeeeease! ^___^

~Kate~
person asaroth
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hi!
what an irritating delusional woman! as if they had any choice at all, besides she should reconsider her conception of fairness, bet she\'ll have a nasty surprise with the boys as she\'s not used to fighting a tandem and also both boys are survivors to the core! even if they\'re not used to jungle or forest or the like, they haven\'t survived a war for nothing! ha!
by the way thx for the precision with the heads, it helped.
update soon!
asaroth
person black beauty
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Arg... I knew this was bound to happen, yet somehow I can feel angsty about Heero\'s and Duo\'s predicament. I guess that shows that you have talent. Thanks for the acknowledgement. Originally I was going to mention that this chapter took way too long to post. But as I kept reading the chapter I nearly forgot to complain about it. This fic is great, it has me at the edge of my seat and yet I can\'t help but ask: do they scape from the island? I know I\' of those people that when something gets to tense wants to know if all ends well. But no worries even without that reasurance I would not stop reading this fic because it is very great. Keep it up and keep updating.
person asaroth
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I\'ve finally read this fic and I can tell you I\'ll be bugging you with it soon^.^
I love the moment where duo is thinking about the shots of the first night not realizing he\'s just given away the fact that he wasn\'t asleep at that time and heero picks up on it but won\'t say a thing.
poor guys, they\'re stranded on that island with that crazy woman who\'ll no doubt want to hunt them and even if there\'s a rescue party there\'s no way one can find them on a island not on maps and certainly miles away from their last position...sob..sob...they\'re on their own!
shoulder mounts? how are they displayed? I mean, does it stop at the upper part of the shoulder or are there any length of arms befor the cut was made? and for hea heads? human necks might be ackward to use for a mount unless standing on a even surface such as a table...anyway it\'s positively gruesome!
duo and heero are in quite a precarious position as ivana might know of their little incursion in her rooms..so ease the doubt and update soon!

cya!
person michelle
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
geeesss....getten me all worked up and you don\'t even finish the story......
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG.......
I CAN\'T TAKE IT ANY MORE!!!! (pulls out hair and runs away)
(pokes head around the corner) i realy liked your story though (leaves after giving a way too perkey smile)
person LW
schedule August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
About damn time they figured it out. -lol- Can\'t wait for the next chapter! -is all giddy about how cute Duo and Heero are- You know what the funny thing is? I just read that story in class. -lol-
person simmysim
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh ... wow. That was just amazing. I\'m in awe of your writing abilities. Just spectacular ... the details, the characterizations. Just stunning, and I can\'t wait to see how you\'ll play out their relationship. :D
person SailorAuroraHelios
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*eyes narrow at Ivana* >.> Grrrrr... She hunts PEOPLE! GET OUT OF THERE HEERO, DUO! *sighs* I\'m not reviewing as I read... *goes back to reading* AAAAH! NO! YOU DON\'T WANT TO GO HUNTING WITH HER! *whimpers and goes back to reading* *blinks a bit, rereads the bit where they sleep in the same bed, talking in morse code* ...Why do I think that\'s fairly cute? ^___^ *gasps and points as they\'re cuddled together* THAT\'S EVEN CUTER!!!! WAI! ^______^ GOOD CHAPTER! *twitches* Ugh... and soon the hunt will begin... *Grumbles* *runs to read the next chapter*
person SailorAuroraHelios
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaai... *huggles Heero and Duo plushies* I... loved the whole part where Duo is reflecting on how he didn\'t know Heero very well... and... *sigh* So cute... *goes to read next chapter*

~Kate~
person SailorAuroraHelios
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAH! I KNEW!!! *points at the human trophies* >.> Crazy woman... *continues reading* *whimpers and clings to Duo and Heero* Oh Lord... That\'s gotta be... oh God... *goes back to reading* *whimpers some more clinging to Heero and Duo* Nnnnn, to quote Duo, this is seriously fucked up. ...Nnn, this is worse that The Most Dangerous Game... it\'s so detailed. o.o Or maybe what we read in English was a shortedned bit? It was in our Literature book. Aaaah... X_x The hunt is coming soon... soon... soon.... *whimpers more* PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE! I WANT MORE! If you can possibly do me a tiny favor and e-mail me when you update. KRG2001@cfl.rr.com or if you have AIM you can IM me at ShiniMegamiAkari I WANT MORE!!!!!

~Kate~

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