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for Perfect Prey.

by Natea

person ShinKazeKinyoubi
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is soooooooooooo good! I figured out that Ivana was hunting people way before it was mentioned, but I wasn\'t too sure since some of the info was a little......I don\'t know......odd? Anyway, this is a really good fic. I really can\'t wait for more. Hope you post more soon. ^_^
person dreamer
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!! Finally!! Now if only there was a way to get you to work on your other poor, neglected, lonely fic snapshots...... *hint, hint* Anyway, i\'m glad you updated. I can\'t believe what that women had in that room!!! I mean, i knew it was people she was hunting but a whole room full!!! How long has she been at this!!! Maniac! And she has the nerve to invite them to hiunt with her!!! I totally understand what duo aeeroeero are feeling, and i think that they are extremely brave to still be there in one piece. If it was me, i would have first thrown up at the sight of the heads, then fainted, preferably not on my puke. Someone would have had to drag me out of there because god knows when i would have woken HaveHave i mentioned i hate blood and anything related to dead people, well i do. After all that, i would probably try to swim to escape. I have *no* idea how thay can stay there!! I would take my chances with sharks, whales, eels, seamonsters, whatever instead of staying there!!! No way!! That women is crazy and i bet she is going to find out that they know what she is up too. After all, she is a hunter and has to be keen on details right? No matter how good they act, i remember heero told duo to shut the drapes, he never told him to open them again. Maybe she wont notice this, but she will find out somehow. I can\'t even begin to imagine what it feelslike to be hunted, but i applaud those brave bakas that are heero and duo. I hope they find a way to get out of there ASAP. I said it before, and i\'ll say it again, i don\'t trust those boat people they are counting on. Nope, they are most likely her accomplices. Who else can take her her prey? If i can think of this, surely heero can too. He was the perfect soldier after all. Come on, they are making so many mistakes i don\'t know how they are surviving!!!! I hope you update sbecabecause the suspense is killing me!!! I can\'t wait to see what happens next, and thanks for clearing up the subject on the dogs. Take care, ja!
person Leslie
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated. The story is really starting to pick up. I read the story this is loosely based on years ago and the changes you have made are great. The relationship between Herro and Duo is perfect. Can\'t wait for more.
person black beauty
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss. Another great chapter. Keep up the *great* job. Btw, thanks for acknowledging my reviews. You\'re an awesome writer.
person black beauty
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Come on? update already. I\'m dying to see how this fic develops. I can\'t stand the wait. I like this fic so much. Hurry up and update soon. Oh and don\'t forget to keep up the good job.
person Ita-chan
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WWWWWoooooaaahhhhhhhhh,.....*clap,clap*......this fic of yours is Veeeeeerrryyyyyy
Goooooooooddddddd,.....i can\'t wait to know what\'s gona happen to our
poor boys now that things are starting to get eeriely suspicious
Ne???.....will th they able to survive that bitch \"hunt\"???.....who is the hunter
and who is the hunted???.....OOOOOhhhhhhhhhh Coooooonnntiiinuuuueeeeeeeee
Sooooooooonnnnnnnnn,....Onnnnneeeeeggggaaaiiiiiiii????.....i love the way you write
duo,....he seems Sooooooo Seeeexxxyyy,.... ^.~
and heero too,....can\'t wait to see some Hoooootttttt SSpppiiiicccyyyyy
Leeeeemmmmoooonnnnnn between these two,....after all anything could
happen after being stranded in an isolated island Neee???...*evil hentai grins*...
keep-up the good work kay,.....and HHHuuuurrryyyyyyyy-Upppp with the next
chapter,......this fic Reeeeeaaalllllyyyyyyyy need Mooooooorreeeeeeeee Chhhhhaapprrrrrrrrrssssssss,...
till next chapter,....*wink*.....Jaaaaaaaaaa and Gaaaaaaannnnnbaaaatttttteeeeeee-Nee!!^.~!!

person dreamer
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, i\'m glad that atleast they seem to be on to her lies. That woman is very dangerous. I mean, what exactly does she need such a big pack of dogs on an island. I would have thought that 3 or 4 would be enough for her, but no she needs lots. I didn\'t know that type of dog could jump so high, i learned something new. Anyway, if it is people she is humting, which i am almost certain it is, i feel really bad for them. It must be horrible to be hunted and to fear constantly for your life. I hope heero and duo do keep alert and don\'t trust the boat people when they go. Take care, ja!
person deadtoast
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is based on another, no? This story, although good, reminds me of a story a read a few years ago when a man was stranded on a deserted island, meeting a man who was bored with the animal he priviously hunted, and dedcided to hunt \"the perfect prey\": people. Being stuck on a island in the middle of nowhere and simply being told to run is not exactly the dream vacation. I like your turn on the story, becoming a slight introspective fic ased on two people in fear. I in no way mean to insult you by saying this is based on something else. It is very good and I hope to see more chapters to this.
person RyoGin
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Please comtinue your story! This is going very well and I hope to see another chapter soon!
Ryo Gin
person Leslie
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. The description of the shuttle crash was very well done. Looking forward for the hunt to begin.

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