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March 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A few minor errors: 1) it's Toma 2) it's spelled Saiyajin not Saiyjin
There are also a handful of garbled words that might just be AFF,'s formatting that you could probably correct yourself if you read through it once more.
I wish you had written more of this family's sexy Soncestuous ways, I especially would like to find out just HOW Radditz and Kakkarot team up against their father. While I'm not much for Radditz, I love me some Bardock; that hunky Saiyan manmeat is welcome anytime, anywhere, with anyONE. It's too bad this was written so long ago...you probably aren't even an active member on this site anymore, but, if you do by chance read this perhaps you'll consider making this into a longer story. I'd be happy if it was just a few chapters more
There are also a handful of garbled words that might just be AFF,'s formatting that you could probably correct yourself if you read through it once more.
I wish you had written more of this family's sexy Soncestuous ways, I especially would like to find out just HOW Radditz and Kakkarot team up against their father. While I'm not much for Radditz, I love me some Bardock; that hunky Saiyan manmeat is welcome anytime, anywhere, with anyONE. It's too bad this was written so long ago...you probably aren't even an active member on this site anymore, but, if you do by chance read this perhaps you'll consider making this into a longer story. I'd be happy if it was just a few chapters more