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March 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
liking the whole she uses the info against him thing. but would gohan just tell her like that? and everything? theres one thing saying that your 1/2 alien its another saying you transform into giant monkeys she didnt have to know all of that straight away! and didnt have to know that goku would have destroyed the bloody earth! was videl a virgen? im sorry but i (urgm) this person i know (cough) was a total klutz the first time and totally embarrased...WATS WITH THE BOLDNESS? do not get me wrong though THIS IS NOT A FLAME :)
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMKami, that was AMAZING!!! This story has got to get more reviews! ITS SO GOOD! I LOVE HOW YOU PORTRAYED GOHAN! HE\'s SO FUCKING SEXY!!!!!
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Will there be more chpts after this?Please update this fic. Arigatou!
JA NE!
JA NE!
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
um, wow?
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!Aperently I was right.If I thought the firs chapter was good,this definately tops it.WOW!!Write some more.I loved the sex scenes.This is actualy the first lemon fic I\'ve read about Gohan and Videl.Although I have read many other lemon fics.This was great.Keep it up.TTFN.
DRAGONBALL Z RULES!!!!!!!
DRAGONBALL Z RULES!!!!!!!
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story.It was sooooo romantic.Not to mention totally \'hot\'.It was great,and that was only thea first chapter.Well on to the second chapter.I\'m sure it will be just as good.
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dman, I just read two of your fics in a row, both about \'first times\'. You\'re very good at expressing first love and, uh, first \"loveLoveLove your work!
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July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great G/V fic! Probably one of the best I\'ve seen. Keep up the awesome work!
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was the most awsome thing I have ever read in my entire life. I can barely believe that I got to read that for free. you should be charging a dollar per minute for people reading this, and you\'d become a millionair. fucking excellent, the best DBZ fiction ever.