rate_review Reviews

Well, I don\'t know if I should be happy or hit you :P I spent at least 5 hours reading this entire story, and had a hard time ignoring my nagging brother who was telling me to go to sleep..like hell! Not when there\'s a chance of Shinigami arriving on the scene! Okay, what can I say, I\'m obsessed. PLEASE write more, I\'m dieing to find out what happen! That and hear more about meh new hero Shinigami!

wow, at first I really thought duo was dead, then it was all a vision i was quite releived.

I need to read more of it !

Do you know actual gay men laugh at fag hags like you?

your fix sux and 0 yea it is gay

This is quite possibly the worst fanfic I have ever read. WTF did Relena ever do to deserve this, other than fall in love with Heero? There is no canon in GW, Heero is not necessarily gay with Duo. The pairings were meant to be ambiguous. Relena\'s a better character than your precious Gundam Wing pilots, she\'s the only one who actually develops, and maybe that\'s why people don\'t like her. Because she has depth. Leave the poor girl alone. Write Duo and Heero fucking each other up the ass all you want, but don\'t bash a girl who has done nothing to deserve it. That it so incredibly low, and you should be ashamed. If you really love Gundam Wing, you should respect every character enough to write them well, even if you don\'t like them.

Oh, and I doubt that Duo would turn all goth over his braid. It\'s a goddamn braid. Hair grows back. And why does it have blood on it? Last time I checked, hair doesn\'t bleed when you cut it.

I honestly thought that this was post-EW until Chapter 5. If there\'s a war going on, I think that Heero and co. should have higher priorities right now. But who cares about winning a war if your sexy braided boyfriend has been wronged by a clingy stalker? Never mind that that\'s what Gundam Wing is about. A damned war. Not a yaoi, OOC gropefest. If you want that, read Gravitation and leave Gundam alone. I hate Wing, but not even that show deserves \"fangirls\" like you.

let me make a reader\'s digest version of the previous negative review:
this fic sux teh r4w c0x.

also, i would like to point out:
this writer sux teh r4w c0x.

Seriously, learn to write. And why is this considered an adult fanfic? looks to me like it wouldn\'t be good enough for a 3 year old\'s bed time story.

I\'m glad your updating this fic!! I\'ve really enjoyed it, but I want a happy ending for everyone. Well except Relena that is, I want an unhappy ending for her! I do hope your able to finish this one soon, the suspense is killing me!!

Ame

u know, u can make a good book with ur fic ^_^ cuz is really good and it\'s Long.

Dude, that was different!! ::chuckles smirking:: Dare I say, I do like how you thought that one out to go with Duo being Shinigami... Seen others where he actually was... but I think I sortta like this one better... or maybe, more so its the way Shinigami came out when Duo\'s braid was chopped off? heh Who knows! But I do like the story!! ^__^ You write really good with handling the relationships in it too. heh One suggestion though - seek out a beta reader, or re-read it before you post it maybe? I\'ve noticed mistakes and missing words in places... That aside, it\'s a really good fic. ^_~ I wish ya the best in finishing it!! Ja!

This is a great fic Im a huge fan of 1x2 and thanks for the eva quote in 9 I love kawrou too!