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July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*claps*
I enjoyed this! Read all twelvapteapters tonight. ^^ Very well written, and a fewo\'so\'s, but I read your reason why, and I respect that. (Man, I can\'t even spell right even with English as a first lanuage! What does that tell you?? LOL.) The whole dream sequence of Relena (bitch) cutting Duo\'s hair freaked me out. Duo just isn\'t Duo without the braid! I would write more, but it\'s 2am, and I\'m beat. -_- I can\'t wait to see more! Happy writing!
I enjoyed this! Read all twelvapteapters tonight. ^^ Very well written, and a fewo\'so\'s, but I read your reason why, and I respect that. (Man, I can\'t even spell right even with English as a first lanuage! What does that tell you?? LOL.) The whole dream sequence of Relena (bitch) cutting Duo\'s hair freaked me out. Duo just isn\'t Duo without the braid! I would write more, but it\'s 2am, and I\'m beat. -_- I can\'t wait to see more! Happy writing!
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June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sakura: Yay! Aon ion in the first chapter! What more could you ask for?
Sasuke: Hmm, let me see....a girlfriend who isn\'t seazedazed?! I liked the story, except for the mushy parts. Yuck.
Sakura: My favorite sport is reading fics that bash Relena and Kikyo!
Sasuke: Hmm, let me see....a girlfriend who isn\'t seazedazed?! I liked the story, except for the mushy parts. Yuck.
Sakura: My favorite sport is reading fics that bash Relena and Kikyo!
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June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is going great! Everything seems okay with H and and Duo!!!
I can\'t wait until the next chapter!
I can\'t wait until the next chapter!
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May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m looking forward to the next chapter this is going great and I loved the \'It was all a dream part\' and HOORAY!!! Duo\'s awake!!!
Wonder what\'s going to happen to Relena are they going to kill her? or is she going to spend the rest of her life in the loony bin?
Wonder what\'s going to happen to Relena are they going to kill her? or is she going to spend the rest of her life in the loony bin?
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May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story was sweeeeeeeeeet! I couldn\'t stop reading it. It got a bit confussing during one part but I finally got it like a minute or two later since i\'m extremerly slow. Anyway I like to say... I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it and I love it! I hate the way Relena is always trying to seperate Heero and Duo that in mine i let Duo have his revenge... and I\'m not giving away the ending either
Love the fic by 1 000 000 000x
Raven
Love the fic by 1 000 000 000x
Raven
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May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Very nice plot. A little confusing, but very well written, considering. Could use a little work on the grammar, but very good.
I love writers like you, good plots, not totally inconcievable, and well written.
I love writers like you, good plots, not totally inconcievable, and well written.
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going, I can\'t wait to see the next chapter!
Once again you are stating the obvious about Relena! I take it she\'s going to spend the rest of her life in the loony bin!
Once again you are stating the obvious about Relena! I take it she\'s going to spend the rest of her life in the loony bin!
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May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How in the hell could you stop it there. You cruel person that is so not fair!!!!! I want to know what is going to happen since Duo did wake up in time to stop her and Heero was there in time to prevent it. Now what is going to happen to the \"BITCH\"? I hate her so much. She is so annoying and I want her to die a painful death. I think it is cool how you had Duo slash up Relena once for everyone. That had a symbolic meaning as well as a deeper one. We all have crimes we must atone for, yet she committed a crime against one of the most scared things in our life. Love. Please write again soon and
don\'t give up on this story no matter what you do. I would like them to end up happily ever after and a nice lemon scene after. Oh, and have that Bitch just go jump off a cliff or something, no one really gives a damn about what happens to her anyway. Let the others remember what happened and don\'t make it just a dream, it seems much more real this way. I want to see that girl suffer for what she did to Duo she doesn\'t deserve to live in the same era as the G-boys and I hope that they all get one good wack at her before Duo kills her...again. Please update soon, I can\'t wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love ya,
Aria
don\'t give up on this story no matter what you do. I would like them to end up happily ever after and a nice lemon scene after. Oh, and have that Bitch just go jump off a cliff or something, no one really gives a damn about what happens to her anyway. Let the others remember what happened and don\'t make it just a dream, it seems much more real this way. I want to see that girl suffer for what she did to Duo she doesn\'t deserve to live in the same era as the G-boys and I hope that they all get one good wack at her before Duo kills her...again. Please update soon, I can\'t wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love ya,
Aria
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May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love how this is going! That whe where Trowa, Quatre, Wufei and Zechs spoke to Relena was the best bit! Very Well done.
So all that was just kind of premonition, huh? So Duo doesn\'t get his braid cut off.
I look forward to the next chapters this is getting even better! ^_~
So all that was just kind of premonition, huh? So Duo doesn\'t get his braid cut off.
I look forward to the next chapters this is getting even better! ^_~
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May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you better continue! I luv it!