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ACK ARE YOU EVER GOING TO WRITE MORE?

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i like this fic! please update sooonnnnnnnnn! thanx i give it a **** star rating~!

What....don't tell me it's finish...i hope you mean the chapter is finish!!!! Cuz i want to read some more....i've been feeling as frustrated as Vegeta in this story ,since i've started reading it. Not my fault, i'm a hentai! please write more.

oh my god, you should write more! I like this. pl wri write more, I think you're doing a great job! Plus, can't wfor for the lemon!

NO YOU DON'T HAVE 2 END IT THERE.

UPDATE SOON!?

Augh! You left it there?! No! You HAVE to write more! NOW! Lol Great fic. Seriously, wonderful. I love the flashbacks to Vegeta's past and stuff, too. Now, about the lemon...*g*

This story is great. I was a little thrown trying to figure out what was going on because of the different timeline, but after I figured out what was different I was fine. The background info on Vegeta is great, and it so makes sense. The things you mention about his past are things that I could imagine Akira Toriyama saying happened. Unfortunately in the show we learn very little about his past, so this is really cool. I can\'t wait to see what happens next!

I really like this fic - can\'t wait for the next chapter. ^_^ That is a hint to write more by the way (sublte eh?)

I read this before on ff.net I think. Well then I had only read up to six chapters. So I was very happy to read chapter 7 and 8. Great fic. It\'s very adventurous and exciting. I love the fact that they are dependant (sort of) upon each other for survival and that they are secluded on a ship together. The possibilities of romance and sexual tension are endless. And you’re doing a great job with this. I love how Vegeta is confused over what he is feeling for her. And showing significant events in his past, which has affected him, and how he allows—more so disallows himself to feel emotions for her--is an excellent addition. I love how he’s holding back and because of it he is pained and realizes that he cannot escape the reality of what is going on. I also like how you write Bulma. She’s really cool and I enjoy reading her. I also think her curiosity over his tail is very cute. The whole spider thing in the bathroom was amusing to read. Usually authors would write Vegeta as being so aloof he’d blast the thing to kingdom come no questions asked. But you made him get a bit scared since the thing was so big and gross looking--them two jumping back in disgust and fright. That was very entertaining to read. ^_^ Keep up the good work. I will be anxiously waiting for the next installment.