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for On The Other Side Of The Window

by Deb

person Shinigami02
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy.
person VegaLume
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Drowing in my own drool* OMG this is not the first time that I have read this fic
and it will be tbe the last LEMON FOREVER! *waves mini flag*
I love your work, keep it up

smile always
Vega-Lume
person Deb
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say a heartfelt thank you to all of you people who so kindly reviewed this fic. Your comments and feed back is always very much appreciated. I\'m pleased you all enjoyed the fic so much, I thoroughly enjoyed writing it. It is always a pleasure to write for such a lovely group of readers. I hope you continue to read my fic\'s and let me know what you like / dislike about them, afterall that is the only way I can improve my skills.
*Hugs and Gundam Pilots to you all*
Regards
ShenLong
person Takaro
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*squeals and bounces* incredible! I always wondered what happened with Heero and Duo before, this was soooo good ^_^*waves his 1x2x1 drool worthy flag* yay!
person Rez
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww! That was such a wonderful ending!!! Oh, beautiful! And so very touching. True poetry on the face of love. *sigh*

The juxtaposition of the two voyers plus Duo and Heero was wondeful. Espcially with the mirroring actions that both couples were engaged in. Also, the descriptions were detailed and gave the story it\'s extra \"oomph\". Absolutely wonderful. Not to mention te little \'schpeel\' that Duo just gave which is the same (i'm n'm not mistaken) that Quatre gave in \"Dance With Me\" when Quatre made love to Trowa.
Or was it Trowa? Bad memory. Well, in any case, it gives your stories a nice flow and transition into each other. Similar to your \"Duo\'s outfit\"; which has been repeated in every story. Mainly the \'tight black pants, lilac shirt, hair in a ponytail tied with a matching lilac ribbon.\' It\'s an amazing outfit that works with Duo beautifully. Awwsome story.

Not to mention how friggin hot tha was. It seems as though Duo is not the only one in the relationship to be a bit of an exhibitionist. Not thaat iat is a bad thing. Especially in the carreer choice of these two men. Oh, they most certainly will have many return customers. Yessir.

Great story. I can\'t wait to see what you come out with next. I\'m sure it will be equaly a delectable. Till then, keep typin\'
person Ryouga
schedule May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO It can\'t be over *cries* OMG once again you have exceeded yourself in the art of making me need a cold shower ^^;; That was toooo hot for even me that time God Two lots of heated bodies writhing around .Talk about a sizzling scorcher . Oh that was pre-meditated torture and you put me through more torture than you will ever know *grins* ... . GOD IT WAS SOOOOO GOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!! ....
person Ita-chan
schedule May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WWWWooooaaahhhh,...the lemon scenes on that last chapter is quite HHHHHooooooottttttttttt,...*drools*....
and Veeeerrrrryyyyyyy SSS SSSSttteeeaammmyyyyyyyy too,...*lickin lips*....
YYYYYuuuummmmmyyyyyyy,...*sssiiiiigghhhhh*....
good job Shenlong-sama,...i\'m glad you write this sequel,...it\'s much
better than the first one,...i love ..ke..keep-up the good work kay,...and write
more 1x2x1 fics please,...*waving 1x2x1 yaoi flags*...yours were simply
Ammmaaaazzingggg Maaaannn,...till next time,...Jaaaaaaaaaa and Gaaaaaanbbaateeee-Neee!!^.~!!
person Rez
schedule May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*claps excitedly* That has to be my favorite lemon from you!! *thinks* That I can remember anyway. Awww! Feel the love! However, I can\'t wait for the last chapter. Eventhough while I was reading I got the uncomfortable feeling about the whole Mr. \"bread and butter\" of Zechs\'s operation. For a second I almost thought it was Heero\'s father. *thinks* I was a little worried there for a second. Oh well. Great chapter! You can really feel the chemistry between these two! So very...touching shall we say? I\'m such a sucker for these, aren\'t I? *shrugs* Oh well. It\'s to be expected with this kind of quality with my fave pairing from GW! Keep typin\'
person Ryouga
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was just the best *sighs dreamily* I can\'t wait for part 4 Although I may_have to take that cold shower you suggested to me over the IM whie I was reading this *Hentai grin*I so think you write the best lemons ^__^ *dances about* you\'re my lemony goodness girl. I mean Who cares about apples when you gots lemons as good as this ^_~
person Gosuke Yurason
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is excellent... hope you continue updating soon... if you want you could read my fic : \"The Irony of Love\"; and \"Behind the Mask\" on fanfiction.net

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