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Please Finish this! It\'s really good... I could totally see it playing out and I adore your style of writing! Please Finish this!

what a fabulous story!! It\'s sad, but so touching! I love how Quatre and Trowa have become so close and now Trowa\'s his legal guardian!! Yes, Trowa should DEFINITELY quit teaching...I mean, he cares so much more for Quatre and he\'d probably get sued because he can\'t hide how he cares for him. Plus going on active duty will pay MUCH MORE than teaching! And Quatre could go with him! I think that\'s the best plan yet and maybe....maybe eventually Trowa can permanently adopt Quatre, I mean Quatre\'s 17 and under law he can go with anyone he chooses to live with if there\'s enough evidence against the parents. Then, to the public eye, Trowa will be Quatre\'s new father and Quatre will stop being a juvenile delinquent and actually make himself something worthwhile...but inside their house, they\'d be lovers and companions! HOW ROMANTIC! You MUST continue this asap! Are you posting stories at your new site?! I really hope you update this soon! I\'ll check back here and your site soon!! UPDATE!!!
luv,
Candy

Well, I just got done reading International Relations and I was impressed. Your story had substance, a plot, and you thought out most twists and turns. About Quatre\'s character being OOC I can see that he is sort of, but we all interpret his character differently. With a father like his Quatre could have dam well turned out that way. Quatre being punk is better than Quatre in a dress (don\'t you hate those authors that make Quatre so dam feminine, s qus quite disturbing). Quatre can hold is own and is tough, that\'s the Quatre that is more true to the character. Trowa being a bitentaental on Quatre is also true. It\'s shown in the end of the GW episodes when Trowa carries Quatre after he is injured.

There is a few mistakes. Sometimes a misplaced word that is easy to look over. When a character is thinking to themselves you tend to use a first person approach, which isn\'t wrong, just confusing. Going from third to first person even for just a sentence can be a bit unsettling. You don\'t do this often so don\'t worry that it is that big of a deal. Some chapters you don\'t space between paragraphs this is slightly annoying.

All I can say about the age difference between the two protagonists is that in four years there won\'t seem to be that much of a break.

For the record I am a Catholic (not too strict about many of the \"rules\") and a moderate when it comes to politics. I\'ve voted for many Republicans in the past and will in the future. I love your story and I don\'t see any phedophilia in it, two consenting adults, what\'s wrong with thatI thI think you made a comment about this in Fight Club...)

Keep writing and improving. luc luck!

AH!!!!!!! I FINALLY FOUND IT!!!! I thought i\'d never find your fic again!! *Cries* Why was it deleted off fanfiction.net? b/c of the whole teacher/student thing? If that\'s why, well then that\'s just plain dumb. I LOVE THIS FIC!! Keep up the great writing!!

Well....I don\'t really know what to say here, and I don\'t really know if I wanna say it here, so I\'ll send you an e-mail ok?! For know I\'ll just say.....WONDERFUL WORK!!!!

ack! you BETTER continue this arc! im loving this story! poor quatre... ;_; but hopefully trowa makes it allllllll better, ne?
oh and congrats on your graduation! (omedetou gozaimasu!) have fun, graduate, then get back to the story! ^_^;;
^_^annabellemanix^_^

*does his last little dance, waving his pretty 3x4 flag all around before darting off*

This ondeonderful. I just love this story. Please continue soon!

Wow, I am definitely in love with this story. Your characterizations of Quatre and Trowa are magnificant and very well written. I especially love what you\'ve done with Quatre. Seeing him in such a different light is just glorious. Now, I can\'t wait to see how these two continue on now that Quatre is in Trowa\'s care. Hurry soon with more!

*sniffles* Poor Q-man. I think I missed the beating...or something...I missed a lot. I mean I read it...but yeah...*soft grin* I guess life is catching up. ANYWAYS! I can\'t wait to see a lot more...erm...read a lot more so I can do another little dance for you. Ja!