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for You Make Me Sick

by Cherry

schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot, that was great. I love it *goes to read your other stories*
person .:sMs:.
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Scared? Why should I be scared?

. . .

Anyway, that was EXCELLENT. Absolutely. You\'re extremely good at writing, VERY professional; the words flowed very well from one sentence to the next, one scene to the next.

[Also, it was VERY...stimulating. Hehe. Or, to borrow a line from THE MASK OF ZORRO: \"Yes.... He was very...vigorous. Yes. VERY vigorous.\"]

Also, it was good to find a high-quality hetero GW fic [or any hetero GW fic, for that matter... oy... lol...]. You HAVE to keep writing. Hehe, and if you continue this story, you could have this mini-series of sexual encounters between Dorothy and Quatre.

\'Kay, nuff from me. Ciao!


.:sMs:.
person Chai
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I\'m too eager to read the second installment. Great work! I love Doro-chan and Quatre pairings *purrs contented*
person Catie
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
heh, I remember reading this on FF.N; back when I was a naive little newbie otaku utterly stunned by what people could do with these characters. ^^x; Wow, four years can *really* corrupt a person... (sehmket helped a lot with that). Anyway, an intruiging little ficlet, well-written unlike most smut I run across. Bravo, and I\'ll definitely be keeping an eye on you...
person Naruke
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hee hee hee! quatre\'s getting his groove on! *does an austin meyers impersonation* oh, yeah, baby!
person Ryouga
schedule March 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehehehe OMG OMG *snickering * You know Dorothy totally creeps me out lol. But I have to admit I really enjoyed this fic . I loved the way that Quatre had such a hold like that over her. HAHA serves you right Dorothy.Not that she seemed to mind in the end ^_~ *snickering more* Great read thanks. Regards Ryouga^___^
person kashychic
schedule January 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more story plz. u r an awesome writter
person Kitsunehi
schedule October 21, 2002 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* Oooooh! I like this one! Not too many QuatrexDorothy fics out there, but this was nice! Great erotic tones and descriptions; and Quatre\'s balls dropped! Yay! Always nice. You planning on writing a sequel? This was fun!!!! ^_^

-Kitsunehi

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