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This story is sooooooo cool Iñm loving trowa so much here, please update soon, cant wait to read more!!!

*blinks* I love it. I really do.
But it\'s so deep and philisophical and...
wow. Just, wow.
I look forward to the next update!
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Yay! I always love it when you update this story. And these last two chapters are so descriptive and beautifully written! Wow. I can\'t wait for more.

i love this line: \"For the person who dies, I suppose it is. For the people around him, though, it\'s change, and change that profound is hard to accept. Changes like death, we\'re rarely ready for. I want to be ready for it, for my own and for those of others.\" touche!


looking forward to some trowa/quatre contact... if you know what i mean ;)

I\'m not usually a Q&T reader, usually skimming them. However, your characterizations of these two and their relationship is beautiful. The peeling away of Q\'s mind and the insight\'s into T\'s as the story develops gets at them in a way I don\'t see often, and has inspired me to look more into this pairing.

There was a slight clean up issue you might want to look into in later editing. The puncatuation at times feels forced and overdone, like many uses of the semicolon. Another area was this : \"Nothing, never mind,\" I said. Rising into the sinking bliss of the was the flicker of physical arousal; I tried to ignore it. \"That feels nice, Trowa.\" --of the was the-- is a bit odd. These are nitpicky but hopefully helpful.

Also, are you going to go into H&D\'s relationship in another story? And what about W?

Nice story! I hope you update soon again.

I am really enjoying this fic. I like how your Quatre is able to so honestly reflect upon himself. The abstractions that you bring to light regarding life, death, and free thought are really interesting as well. I\'ve always been extremely fond of your writing and look forward to more.

Such a great story, and I was happy to see that you updated really quickly. This chapter was very interesting. I like how the two seem to be bonding over art, and I really want to see how Quatre responds to Trowa\'s question. Really, please keep up the great work.

I found It again! OMG! I readt the first three chapters or so ages ago, I don\'t even remember where, lol. I\'m so glad I found it again! I swear it\'s one of the best fics I\'ve ever read. I loved it then and I stil love it now. It\'s not just the story, it\'s the way you write it, and the depth and reality you bring into your characters. Thank you so much for writing it! And please do continue.

Wow. I was curious about the title of your fic because it just sounded ... odd. But once I sat down and read through it, I was oh so impressed. You have quite a talent. And It\'s always nice to get away from girly Quatre fluff and see his serious intellectual side. I absolutely adore what you hace up so far. My only complaint is that there are a lot of typos mixed around in it. I think it has something to dup with up loading it onto adult fanfiction because all of the fics up there that I have been reading are like that. I hope to see more chapters up soon! Very soon!

-Jamie