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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!! this is an AWESOME fic! I just love everything that you do! HOW do you DO it?!?!?!? forget it, just KEEP doing it, k? I love the way you are defining the whole relationship between B&V thanx for the great read!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I only commented the way I did because 1) I found your spelling and grammar mistakes horrible enough that they actually interrupted the flow of my reading; 2) sounding defensive in a FIRST chapter actually invites hostility especially when you demonstrate that you are willing to resort to violence to \"defend\" yourself; 3) I note that my review is actually the only one so far that actually tries to critique your writing (at least on Mediaminer) so I have no idea if you are defensive or not when it comes to even negative comments-- I apologize if this is a wrong assumption but that tends to be the general attitude of most fanfic writers who are defensive over perceived \"slights.\"
I still recommend that you just TAKE IT EASY on the author\'s note. Especially when now, in this newer version, it takes up at lesat 2 paragraphs-- one devoted to me and a heated defense of yourself of why you find it offensive that I thought you would treat my review as a flame. Frankly, I don\'t care for drama so I find any behavior that actually CALLS ATTENTION to drama itself-- devoting a paragraph to me as a reviewer is rather like \"calling me out\" as if for a duel-- rather disrespectful. I find it strange what you choose to be defensive about too-- your comments in and of themselves detract from the story when they clamor for attention to be made to you personally.
Like I said before, this isn\'t a flame but just some advice from a reader that\'s had to wade through a crapload of bad fanfics. You\'re one of the better ones, which is why I bother to even give you some critique. You can take or leave my advice. But if you persist in drama whoring-- I\'ll just shut up. I\'d rather someone think they got an imaginary victory rather than have both sides lose in an Internet battle.
I still recommend that you just TAKE IT EASY on the author\'s note. Especially when now, in this newer version, it takes up at lesat 2 paragraphs-- one devoted to me and a heated defense of yourself of why you find it offensive that I thought you would treat my review as a flame. Frankly, I don\'t care for drama so I find any behavior that actually CALLS ATTENTION to drama itself-- devoting a paragraph to me as a reviewer is rather like \"calling me out\" as if for a duel-- rather disrespectful. I find it strange what you choose to be defensive about too-- your comments in and of themselves detract from the story when they clamor for attention to be made to you personally.
Like I said before, this isn\'t a flame but just some advice from a reader that\'s had to wade through a crapload of bad fanfics. You\'re one of the better ones, which is why I bother to even give you some critique. You can take or leave my advice. But if you persist in drama whoring-- I\'ll just shut up. I\'d rather someone think they got an imaginary victory rather than have both sides lose in an Internet battle.
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD! Wow, this was an incredible story. MuSt HaVe SeQuEl NoW!! I will definitely be looking forward to your next story! Update soon!
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you beter post that sequel soon before someone does kill you.
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh!What kind of ending is that!Seriously though,you had me on the edge of my seat.I will be looking for the sequel now so ta ta!
Angelwarrior!
Angelwarrior!
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Dear. God.
That was... that was... there aren't enough words to describe how utterly horrifying and terribly wonderful that ending was! *shivers* I am seriously just sitting here, my mouth hanging open in shock.
It's just... just... just too terrible to even consider! Poor Vegeta! Poor Bulma! Poor EVERYONE!
Wonderful fic. Amazing. You are truly a gifted writer.
And now I am going to see if you have started the sequel yet. And, if not, I'm going to bounce around impatiently until you do. ;)
*huggles*
QueenC
That was... that was... there aren't enough words to describe how utterly horrifying and terribly wonderful that ending was! *shivers* I am seriously just sitting here, my mouth hanging open in shock.
It's just... just... just too terrible to even consider! Poor Vegeta! Poor Bulma! Poor EVERYONE!
Wonderful fic. Amazing. You are truly a gifted writer.
And now I am going to see if you have started the sequel yet. And, if not, I'm going to bounce around impatiently until you do. ;)
*huggles*
QueenC
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful What the hell happens after the 17 chapter plz weite the sequel soon
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There will be death if you don\'t get a sequel up soon!!!!!!! please post it...please!
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, just call me impatient, but, WHERE IS THE SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was such an evil cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope you are still reading thviewviews for this fic!
Aarrghhhhh!!!!!!
MUST HAVE SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^__^
That was such an evil cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope you are still reading thviewviews for this fic!
Aarrghhhhh!!!!!!
MUST HAVE SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^__^
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How could you!!!.....