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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Funny ending, though it feels like it is missing something, i cant quite put my finger on it.......
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June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more moremore
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June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woa, well done. That certainly helped get me \'excited\'...
There were a few gramatical mistakes (\'her four wheels\'?), but there weren\'t too many of them to spoil the story.
And yes, I would like to see more of that story, if only to see what the two do to satisfy their needs after the dream...mwah.
Either way, good story, hope you write more soon!
There were a few gramatical mistakes (\'her four wheels\'?), but there weren\'t too many of them to spoil the story.
And yes, I would like to see more of that story, if only to see what the two do to satisfy their needs after the dream...mwah.
Either way, good story, hope you write more soon!