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by Lullaby

person NN
schedule June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
twitch twitch my suggestion is to write more! oh and also you could have Goten\'s tail grow back so they are both really....hormonally charged then have Bra trick Goten into a locked room you ki restraints to hold him strap him to a bed and...well you get the idea or you could go with my friend Catty\'s favorite type o lemone and use a hot tub melted chocolet andagicagic scarf that weakens the wearer and hightens the pleasure of the wearer who will remain unnaimed cough Goten cough cough actually I like Catty\'s idea better I love chocolet
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, this looks promising!

I\'d certainly like to see what happens when those two saiya-jin\'s collide in a fluryr of hormones...heh.

Anyway, I do like it so far, though it more than has me wanting the middle, and indeed final, acts!
person cuttie_blossom
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
helloooooooooooooo!! plz plz!! update!! come on!!! i like no love it!!plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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