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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this fic. The end struck me as particularly meaningful, and I enjoyed your phrasing. I did think Kakkarot saying the words of the song could have been paraphrased to make it more meaningful to him and so the fic would flow better. Overall, I\'m glad I read this.
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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it.. so i decided to review it here too.. *shrugs* i was bored... so... bored... I was wondering will there be more chapters? or is this the only one?
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November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm...interested to see where this will go...
so far, very good...
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November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOO, I really like this. Sad that ChiChi left but really cool at the end. Please, keep writing more. :)