schedule
August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule
January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, amazing story! and original plot, please update?
schedule
April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok totaly cool!! love the story. gotta update soon please.
schedule
April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
schedule
March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
schedule
February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dear IcyChic . I am a regular fanfic reader and normally I don\'t review fanfics but yours was just 2 good not to give you a ... \" WAY TO GO !!!! \" I can tell you really worked hard on this ! It\'s almost as if you wrote it from your own life! PLEASE KEEP WRITING , it was just getting good ! ^-^
schedule
November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok you said nobody ever reviews so i will. I think your story is da bomb! you should write faster. ok so i think pan\'s \"papa\" is really sick. you should have vegeta or trunks kill him. i dont car if their sayians or not. i know i am really oppinunated sorry. hurry write more!