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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like Rei...Why cant you whrite more about Rei.....Well..the first chapter is ok...Oh..and you are really a good author..
i\'m new..what is a review??I\'m just ask..I from other land so I can\'t english so much.but I like beyblade...expecilly Reii!!!!!!!!! >___________________________________________<
i like your stories!!!!!!!!!! C\'ya!!!!!!!!
i\'m new..what is a review??I\'m just ask..I from other land so I can\'t english so much.but I like beyblade...expecilly Reii!!!!!!!!! >___________________________________________<
i like your stories!!!!!!!!!! C\'ya!!!!!!!!
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting really good. I\'m getting to grips with the Ray/Tala and Max/Bryan pairings, though I do hope to see some pairings soon. I\'m looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*clapping* Good, as always.. forget the ooc, the story is so beautiful and expressive it doesn\'t really matter...
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A priceless chapter! Tyson seems so mature! And Kai, I think you captured the very essence of Kai in this chapter, how he can be strangely protective and caring. Humm, that thing with Rei, dare I dream of something between them? Very nice, all characters were great, good job!
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon!
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, nice fic. Write more! I wanna see Kai *grovel*!
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting to be a really good story. I\'m really looking forward to reading more. Hope Kai and Tyson work their problem out and we see some pairings soon. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a verry nice storrie. i realy like it!!!!!!! i\'m nervous to know what happens in the nexst chapter! espacialy because i want to know how tyson\'s and tala\'s friendship contius!!!! please keep this storry up.
good luck with writing!!!!!!
( sorry if i din\'t spel something right but i have problems with english on school ( i\'m from the netherlands)
stephanie verver
good luck with writing!!!!!!
( sorry if i din\'t spel something right but i have problems with english on school ( i\'m from the netherlands)
stephanie verver
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i\'m really likeing this story but i have to ask when the ty/ka comes in because im a die-hard ty/ka fan
and i\'d really like to see that more seing as you put that for the pairings and have it come in to play.
and i\'m starting to get warry at the fact that it starting to sound like a tyson/tala pairing and that that
thought is starting to turn me off of this story but im still praying that it is a true ty/ka thick and thin.
PPPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon and lessen my fears. thanks
ja ne
and i\'d really like to see that more seing as you put that for the pairings and have it come in to play.
and i\'m starting to get warry at the fact that it starting to sound like a tyson/tala pairing and that that
thought is starting to turn me off of this story but im still praying that it is a true ty/ka thick and thin.
PPPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon and lessen my fears. thanks
ja ne
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter. Even if it still feels a tad out of character it\'s real good seing how you describe their feelings so easely (and you\'re not english). Are these the first hints of a TysonxTala thing or will turn into some sort of brotherly love?
hum, I wonder if the watcher was Bryan feeling jealous of Tyson... well, guess I have to wait to find out.
hum, I wonder if the watcher was Bryan feeling jealous of Tyson... well, guess I have to wait to find out.