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So Takao and Tala are freinds now who is going to get Jealous? and well Tala and Takao help eachother to get the people they love? maning Kai and Rei? I think that would be nice
But\'s it up to you now no rush on it good work on this one.

This is getting really good. Hope to see more very soon. I really love Tyson/Tala friendship. I wish it could be more and Kai with Max, but I love TyKa pairings so I don\'t mind. Keep it up.

This is getting really good. Hope to see more very soon. I really love Tyson/Tala friendship. I wish it could be more and Kai with Max, but I love TyKa pairings so I don\'t mind. Keep it up.

Whos were the pair of eyes?! Tell mee!!! @_@

Very good, very good indeed. Amasing how you, not being english, are writing much better then half the english speakers around this site. Honestly, I didn\'t see any typos, the editing is perfect, the words are all well chosen - or should I say are well picked? It seems you chose every single word you used with extreme care, that\'s the kind of author I like, the one that writes, not the one that makes something and then publishes it... The conversation between Tyson and Tala, though very sweet and honest it felt a little ooc as I can\'t imagine Tyson being that smart and picking the hidden words. Funny how you had Bryan so nervous, indeed, he doesn\'t seem like the most talkative person does he? At this point I\'m curious on how an art class assignment could join all those boys together (and just how are they going to fill in their choores?). Having Tyson feeling pushed by is Grandfather is definitly something new, one never knows how to feel when others expect something of ourselves. The way you portraited Tyson\'s feelings relating to that felt realistic. Definitly will be fun to read, please keep up with the good work.

Good. For definite. This story has real promise. Although now I\'m confused as to which pairing I like most. I really love TyKa. But now with this chapter, I think I love TyTa, and there aren\'t many of those on this site. Looking forward to reading more.

good chapter...........like the whole tala/tyson thing.............update soon

Very interesting beginning. I was hoping to see more Bryan and Tala in chapter 2.

really well written...hope to read more in the near future!

ooooooooooooooooo i totally luv dis story can u write a new chapter soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz :D