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July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yeah, you WILL finish this fic. Damn, and it was a good start too. It's been 6 years, are you finished yet?
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
First off, nice pen name lol
Second, great job on this tory I'm loving it and can't wait to read more, please update soon!!
Thanks!
-Raine
First off, nice pen name lol
Second, great job on this tory I'm loving it and can't wait to read more, please update soon!!
Thanks!
-Raine
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is very nice. How come you stoped writing it. I really want to see what will happen next between gohan and his father.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Gohan! *sniff* UPDATE SOON!!!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pleaseeeeeee uptaded soooooooonnn..........*grins hyperitly*
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I\'ve just finished reading your Fanfic and I thought it was very good.
The plot is good and makes up for messing up the age on some characters.
I just wanted to encourage you to finish writing your story.
Please write some more chapters because I\'d like to know how it ends and all.
The plot is good and makes up for messing up the age on some characters.
I just wanted to encourage you to finish writing your story.
Please write some more chapters because I\'d like to know how it ends and all.
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December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope u update soon i really luv this story and i was so happy when u updated hope to see more of this story soon
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe... Me again! I\'m loving how this is unfolding! Can\'t wait \'til Ch. 5! <_<
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is good. Things are building up to more things that are dark. Please keep writing more for us. :)
Demini
Demini
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Rayne, your writing style is beautiful. I am loving this fic so far. I do hope you write more! ^_^