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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Is speechless*
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done, I really loved it :> but It kind of leaves you on a cliff hanger. Will their be anymore?
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to leave you a review here, I think this fic was awesome and would love to see a part 2!
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, are you going to write more of this? It\'s amazing.
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, cool story. You should continue this!
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you need to continue this as a chp. fic. It would be interesting to see how it would turn out.
~Liz~
~Liz~
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... Iīm stunned.... that was.... beautiful!!! Really wonderfully beautiful. You got Gokuīs emotions across so clearly itīs astonishing... Iīm speechless. Wonderfully written. Please write a sequel (and if you do please donīt make Vegeta all \"whoa, I like it rough.\" because thatīd just be plain wrong and happens too often in fictions ^-^) Very uniquely written.... I love it alot!!! Didnīt expect to read something like that so early in the morning, but you made my day today!
~sinningia~
~sinningia~
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love fics that explore the darkness inside Goku. That was awesome and I feel sorry for my poor little prince...give us more please!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved it! Teehee I want you to write more! Well,maybe not, leave us wondering what happens! Still, I will so read more!!!!!!!!!!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Intense and disturbing. Very well written. I\'m always uneasy with rape stories, because rape is not love, not sex. It is violence and taking. I don\'t see how Vegeta could ever accept this theft of self, and Goku would have to be deluded and lying to himself to think that it could be otherwise. I\'m hoping you continue this in a realistic vein, instead of having something like \'He raped me and now I love him\'.